Is this correct?

• Gladiator-versus

  16 Aug 13, 23:36

  Hello everybody.

  I'm from Germany and it would be awesome if you guys could check my sentences.

   

  Thanks a lot.

   

  11.Shake your bottle as long as possible until someone shout: STOP IT!!

   

  12.Open a packet of chewing gum in front of your teacher and share the chewing gums with your group.

   

  13.Fall from you chair and bawl: HELP

   

  14.Go to the teacher and give him a blank sheet.

   

  15.Yield the blanket with your pencils.

   

  16.Ask your teacher whether you can get a pencil. If you get one, put it on the table of your teacher and go to your seat.

   

  17.Write on a sheet: " (Your Teachers name) is a stupid donkey. From (Your name) and than put it on your teachers table. If he read it and get angry beacause of you, just say: I didn't wirte that! That's not my handwriting.!

   

  18.Take off your shoes. And look at the reaktion of your teacher / classmates.

   

  19.Just start eating during the lesson

   

  20. Count your pencils loudly.

• Seowlah

  17 Aug 13, 00:08

  Homework forum has no English teacher or tutor lah.

  But FireIce's English is very powerful, maybe she will check and correct your

  sentences  

• Gladiator-versus

  17 Aug 13, 23:07

  Thanks :D

   

  But do you see any gramatical errors?

   

   

• Seowlah

  18 Aug 13, 14:25

  Originally posted by Gladiator-versus:

  Thanks :D

   

  But do you see any gramatical errors?

   

   

  My English is very lauzi and laosee. 

  My standard of English is F9, E8 type