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• chrisbenoit

  22 May 06, 05:54

  The Skeleton King had saw Tiny the stone giant coming towards him and started to retreat back to his tower.
  Tiny was no longer tiny, he was huge. He was almost twice as tall as Skeleton King and every step Tiny took shook the ground. Skeleton King stood at his tower and raised his sword. Tiny was moving at an incredible speed for his huge size.
  
  As he lowered his sword fiercely, the scourge army charged forward. Tiny sent a lot of rocks forward and stunned them all, injuring many. The Skeleton King recovered quickly and sent a storm bolt flying through the air to stop tiny from doing more damage. With a few hits, the Skeleton King regained his health, but surprise, Tiny threw the Skeleton King upwards and laughed. While skeleton king was on his way down, Tiny sent a punch of tremendous power through his ribs and skeleton king was sent flying backwards. It was a punch so powerful it broke his ribs.
  
  The tower was doing all it can, throwing damage at Tiny. But Tiny laughed because the damage was nothing to take note of. As Tiny prepared to summon the rocks again, Skeleton King got back to his feet and launched another storm bolt at him. He quickly attacked Tiny to regain some health, but Tiny recovered from the stun and sent the rocks flying and started raining some really massive punches on Skeleton King. In a few moments, the skeleton king was dead. Tiny started to back away, delighted with his victory over the Skeleton King. All this while the tower was attacking Tiny, and Tiny was hurt pretty bad. But while Tiny was backing away, the Skeleton King came back to life. Tiny turned around to take a good look at the battlefield but when he saw the Skeleton King, he got the shock of his life. Tiny started running, but the Skeleton King threw another storm bolt at him. Skeleton King ran up to him, and with a few furious slashes of his sword, and another storm bolt, ended the giant's killing spree. Tiny collasped to the ground, sending dust through the air.
  
  Suddenly, right before his very eyes, the Skeleton King saw the Prophet dropped down from the skies.
  
  "What the hell?" Skeleton King muttered to himself. Out of the corner of his eyes he saw he saw the Dwarven Sniper aimming a shot at him, from afar.
  
  "Dammit. I am so dead." He said to himself.
  
  The Prophet planted a ring of trees around the skeleton king. These trees were so hard and strong nobody has ever gotten out of it before. He had only heard of Spiritbreaker, one of his close friends, get out with a charge of darkness. But he wasnt Spiritbreaker.
  
  "You are so dead, Skeleton King. you shall pay for killing a member of the Sentinel, Tiny !!!" The Prophet Furion cried as he attacked the skeleton king madly. The Sniper unleashed a hell of a long range shot, which almost caused the Skeleton King to collapse.
  
  Suddenly, Skeleton King could feel two of his rib bones being tugged at by something cold, and hard. He flew out of the trees and before he could turn around to see what was going on, he heard the familar voice of Pudge the Butcher.
  
  "Ruuun, my friend !!!"
  
  The Skeleton King started running back to the Scourge's fountain to refuel himself. And he lived to fight another day.
• Simon Dean

  22 May 06, 19:45

  is this story for those 13 year old boys to read one.
• finoq

  22 May 06, 20:19

  you can go to the dota forums fan fiction and post this. I think not bad for their standards.
• dibilo

  22 May 06, 20:29

  hahahaha... very funny story hahaha .. stupid, lame, crappy, but funny.
• finoq

  22 May 06, 20:32

  here's a story (in fact, a dream) from one of the members in the dota forums community...
  
  by heavy_mental
  
  ok so first of all this isnt really thought up and planned carefully, it was just a dream i had when i was drunk. it's kinda blurry but i want to share it with you guys.
  
  k so first i was like playing dota with a bottle of gin, and then i died and went to sit in the sofa, and i slept, and the dream started out like this.....
  
  Sven was like: I AM GOD!!!
  and mohgul khan went like: suck on this
  
  and then leragas the vile was on vacation so everyone was lining up by the river but then they got fed up so the all went home. and in the woods were Lina Inverse with Rylai, and then they were like talkin bout lina's boobs and then they just went lesbian on each other but i wont tell you the details coz
  its too explicit, they were in leragas the vile is supposed to be
  
  then behind the trees,
  
  leshrac was watching
  then in the bushes
  
  *shake* *crack* *and all sorts o noises*
  
  then leshrac saw zues and leshrac said
  
  YOU PERVERT!!
  
  and zues was like
  
  YEAH?!?!? WELL ARENT YOU PEEPING AS WELL YOU BIGGER PERVERT!!!
  
  and leshrac:
  well... um.. yeah but thats freakin unexpected out of a god like you,
  
  zues:
  shut up and watch theyre starting to undress.... uhhh...
  
  and then rylai noticed them and then they chased them and zues trying to protect his face from being seen picked up sh*t and covered it all over his face and lina did this ring of fire thing and the sh*t hardened but he stil was still able to escape. the rylai was doing fine with leshrac,
  
  frostbite----freezinf feild---- then lina comes in and laguna blade T_T
  
  and then rylai:
  
  Lina you make over kill look so hot.
  and they continue on being lesbian..
  
  and then omni knihgt and juggernaut was sitting by the river and
  
  omniknight was:
  dude, u think chicks dig me??
  yurnero:
  dunno, what bout me??
  omni:
  no fu*kin way man, ur face looks like a big red pimple
  
  and then lich walks by and omni says:
  hey lich you think chicks dig me?
  
  lich says:
  with a face like that they should,but probably it's you they dont like
  
  and omni goes like:
  shut the fu*k up you dress wearing freak!
  
  lich was like:
  huh??? this is not a dress, this is the official lich uniform, ya dumbass b*tch!
  
  yurnero was just laughing and(this part of the dream gets blurry)
  
  then suddenly arthas the death knight was playing that ice guitar thing w/ the huge ice amps
  
  then behind him was Joe Satriani
  and satriani says:
  
  that aint how you play it, its like this, and shows him how to play guitar friggin godlike
  
  and Yngwie Malmsteen was therebut in my dream he was like, pudge's dad...
  
  and wait nevermore 1000 yrs ago was a DUDE a white dude,
  
  he had like skin so pale and red hair and red eyes and his "fiance" was luna moonfang,
  
  and there was this scene where luna and nevermore was all emotional and dramatic and luna says like:
  the goddess of the moon calls for me, she needs help
  nevermore: (he had a different name here, just cant remember what it was)
  when will you return??
  Luna:
  i dont know, since in the heavens one minute can mean 10 yrs here on earth,
  nevermore:
  it will be worth the wait,i will try to stay alive until you return.
  
  Luna is one lucky b*tch, coz nevermore was so dedicated and devoted to her
  
  during those 1000+ yrs nevermore was turned into a demon by the burning legion and he was a tyrant commanding armies to war and treating his best men as pawns,
  
  then when luna came back after a 1000+ years,
  
  luna was loooking for nevermore and nevermroe greeted her like:
  
  welcome back "love" in a sarcastic way,
  
  and luna was like:
  
  so i know you?? who the fu*k are you??
  
  you b*tch!!! nevermore said,]
  
  nothing could fill the void, the void that lasted a 1000 yrs,
  
  its ur fault i turned into this!!!
  
  and Luna was like.... she damn ignored him and walked away, and nevermore with his 1000+ yrs of necromastery hit luna and HOLYSH*T!!!! one shot
  
  and there is a huge gap here which i cant remember
  
  then there was this character which i couldnt recognize but i think he was called icefrog since he acted like so wise and knowledgable about what happens in dota,
  
  and in the end billy sheehan and frodo baggins were there and frodo says like
  nice going billy, sven looks like a fagg wearing bell bottoms and holding a huge weapon..
  
  yaaay, and thats where the dream ends i think, this is not really how it happened there were
  alotta stuff i skipped since i cant remember it
  
  haha
  
• JennTS

  22 May 06, 23:09

  Originally posted by finoq:

  here's a story (in fact, a dream) from one of the members in the dota forums community...
  
  by heavy_mental
  
  ok so first of all this isnt really thought up and planned carefully, it was just a dream i had when i was drunk. it's kinda blurry but i want to share it with you guys...............................................................................
  

  this is so much better than the original story.