Continue this...
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I want to see how far this will go...
Pls help out if you have the inspiration...It is actually one of my short poems attempt again, but now I am having writers' block so looking for people to help me out 
Like the ripples on the water...
My life is up and down
Like the sparks in the fire
like the dust in the wind...
flown into my eyes,
my vision of love was clouded.. by you
Like a feather in ether
u told me u would stay forever
But in a second you are gone...
Like the scattered pieces of a jigsaw puzzle...
I picked them up one by one...
searching among hope and despair....
Wondering when everything will fit together..
To form a picture
Like Fire on Ice,
chilli and spice
Onion on Rice,
Kudos and Despise
Stop all this lah, sickening mice!
for what price?
FiReIcE!!!
Continue with anything you like
i.c.y -
Originally posted by icyprincess:
my life is up and down
I want to see how far this will go... Pls help out if you have the inspiration...It is actually one of my short poems attempt again, but now I am having writers' block so looking for people to help me out
[b]Like the ripples on the water...
Continue with anything you like
i.c.y
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Originally posted by icyprincess:
Like the sparks in the fire ....
I want to see how far this will go... Pls help out if you have the inspiration...It is actually one of my short poems attempt again, but now I am having writers' block so looking for people to help me out
[b]Like the ripples on the water...
Continue with anything you like
i.c.y
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you juz ended everything liaoOriginally posted by -mist-:my life is up and down -
I will put up all the continuation in the first post...then I will edit them when they get to considerable length
keep them coming!
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like the dust in the wind...
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u told me u would stay foreverOriginally posted by dcx:you juz ended everything liao
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hi i am uno -
No leh, still can continueOriginally posted by dcx:you juz ended everything liao
i.c.y -
like a feather in ether
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wa...si bey chim...si mi si ether?Originally posted by poon cho tang:like a feather in ether
i.c.y -
like the dust in the wind,Originally posted by poon cho tang:like the dust in the wind...
flown into my eyes, -
Originally posted by unobitch:
But in a second you are gone...
[b]u told me u would stay forever
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hi i am uno [/b]
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my vision of love was clouded.. by youOriginally posted by dcx:like the dust in the wind,
flown into my eyes,
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hi i am uno! -
is u cant link it..well others canOriginally posted by dcx:you juz ended everything liao
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wa..this is better than I thought...everyone is doing a good job
keep it going ppl!
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Second stanza now...
Like the scattered pieces of a jigsaw puzzle..
i.c.y -
Originally posted by icyprincess:
I picked them up one by one...
Second stanza now...
[b]Like the scattered pieces of a jigsaw puzzle..
i.c.y[/b] -
Originally posted by icyprincess:
Your first stanza's OK,
I want to see how far this will go... Pls help out if you have the inspiration...It is actually one of my short poems attempt again, but now I am having writers' block so looking for people to help me out
[b]Like the ripples on the water...
My life is up and down
Like the sparks in the fire
like the dust in the wind...
flown into my eyes,
u told me u would stay forever
Continue with anything you like
i.c.y
[/b]
Though I never said I'd stay,
Cos you're too young for me,
If we meet you will see.
Its hard thinking of this,
As I am in the office,
But it is really necessary,
Cos my boss is looking at me.
So I can't sit around,
And seem free like a clown,
I have to pretend to work,
But writing all this dirt.
When today is through,
I hope he gets a flu,
I hate this stupid company,
Which is stingy with its money.
I've contributed my say,
Now I really can't stay,
You said continue as we wish,
So please do not be miffed. -
gentlerock, how long did you take to write yours?
i.c.y -
Hello!Originally posted by icyprincess:
gentlerock, how long did you take to write yours?
i.c.y
Sorry ah, Mod Icy, sometimes I come in and talk nonsense, then I leave. I'm a kid sometimes.
I was answering phone calls and doing other things as well while writing my masterpiece. And it took me....er.....maybe 20 minutes?
OK, gotta leave now....talk later. -
ancient greek term for airOriginally posted by icyprincess:wa...si bey chim...si mi si ether?
i.c.y -
It is alright, I welcome contribution anywayOriginally posted by gentlerock:Hello!
Sorry ah, Mod Icy, sometimes I come in and talk nonsense, then I leave. I'm a kid sometimes.
I was answering phone calls and doing other things as well while writing my masterpiece. And it took me....er.....maybe 20 minutes?
OK, gotta leave now....talk later.
Tho I still need people to help me with the second stanza...I want to see how it looks like by combining different lines from different people lor...
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oh ic ic..alright I will add your line inOriginally posted by poon cho tang:ancient greek term for air
i.c.y -
searching among hope and despair....
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Wondering when they will fit together...Originally posted by poon cho tang:searching among hope and despair....
To form a picture
Keep it going!
i.c.y