Faith in Love
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Her love guides you
Let your love free
Let it flow
Trust in Love
It will not harm you
It will not slow you
It canÂ’t but help you
She will always be there for you
So trust your love
She loves you -
Hello LeftBallBigger, nice to have your poem posted here.
Nice poem youÂ’ve got there. Simple and straight to the point. Well done.
Well I am glad that you have so much Faith in Love. Hope you will continue to maintain this positive mentality though it is not going to be easy. Good luck.
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your poems seem to be very straight forward, no twists and and turns. as DeadPoet mentioned, some may not like it. but it IS your personal style, so do not worry too much. you can either chose to retain your style or try to add some metaphors, similes or comparison to make it more interesting.
don't be offend okie? trying to help...