Eternity - A Short Verse

• Enigmatic1

  1 Oct 04, 23:41

  Hi peeps, all comments are welcomed. This is just an introductory stanza. Thanks!
  
  Eternity
  
  Love transgresses all matter and ages for eternity and beyond
  It speaks with the Soul of The World
  Through the Language of The World
  An unspoken tongue that seeks to bind us as one
  With Love as the gel that cements us together
  That is the rigidness of my affections for Her
  
• DeadPoet

  2 Oct 04, 00:34

  A good start.
  
  Hope to read the rest soon.
• sleepycat

  2 Oct 04, 00:41

  Originally posted by Enigmatic1:

  Hi peeps, all comments are welcomed. This is just an introductory stanza. Thanks!
  
  Eternity
  
  Love transgresses all matter and ages for eternity and beyond
  It speaks with the Soul of The World
  Through the Language of The World
  An unspoken tongue that seeks to bind us as one
  With Love as the gel that cements us together
  That is the rigidness of my affections for Her
  

  these 3 lines just didn't seem congruous to me..
  
  is Love spoken & heard or remains as an unspoken tongue..?
  
  mind sharing more of your thoughts on them?
  
  awaiting for the rest of it to understand more too.. cheerzzz