Anonymous gloom

• LazerLordz

  14 Sep 04, 07:23

  I found this short piece lying around one day..thought I might share it with you
  (I can't find out who wrote this , but acknowledgements to him/her in advance)
  
  I see a red door and I want it painted black
  No colors anymore I want them to turn black
  I see the girls walk by dressed in their summer clothes
  I have to turn my head until my darkness goes
  
  I see a line of cars and they're all painted black
  With flowers and my love, both never to come back
  I see people turn their heads and quickly look away
  Like a newborn baby it just happens ev'ryday
  
  I look inside myself and see my heart is black
  I see my red door and it has been painted black
  Maybe then I'll fade away and not have to face the facts
  It's not easy facing up when your whole world is black
  
  No more will my green sea go turn a deeper blue
  I could not forsee this thing happening to you
  If I look hard enough into the setting sun
  My love will laugh with me before the morning comes
  
  
• Ito_^

  14 Sep 04, 07:58

  really nice..
• DeadPoet

  15 Sep 04, 21:21

  I think this is the lyric of the song 'Paint It Black' by Rolling Stones (Mick Jagger / Keith Richards).
  
  Can check it out in the Internet.
  
  But it is as good as a poem too.