Originally posted by ratinacage:
i heard that you're hurting,
someone's made you cry.
i wanna be there to comfort you,
be there to dry your eyes.
i'm not sure if you will want me to be there,
since you never called nor write,
or even bother to tell me,if you ever cared.
you did not even visit when i tumbled off my spiralling flight of stairs.
i know you must be in pain,
and that you will never show me
they break you again,again and again
and you dun even break easy.
i'm not sure if you need me to be there,
or will you never show me your crying face,
after the night,i killed your heart
7 years ago at Raffles Place.....
Sad poems always touches the heart and this one is no exception.
Great work!
~I am glad that you mentioned Raffles Place, a place we can all relate to~