2nd DPS poetry writing competition :)
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hahahaa... mine is for fun only cos i'm disqualify... i'm one of the judgesOriginally posted by pipi & poot-poot:& A new contender !!
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Will use your suggestion...Originally posted by DeadPoet:The Courting Game?
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Je t'aime mon cheri
Ich liebe dich mein Liebster
Ti amo mi amor
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Sure no problem!Originally posted by KittynMeow:I sponsor $50 ..... enough?? kekeke 
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I would say he is being VERY creative!Originally posted by the Bear:heng's cheating
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$2, $5, $10.Originally posted by tare:can i suggest that we have 3 prizes? vouchers of different value. then we can all have an outing to present the awards (and spend it)! -
~~ Oooooh ~~Originally posted by DeadPoet:$2, $5, $10.
Donations.......= Prize money.......
Lap it all up ! Put it in d Trophy 4 d winner !
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I think it is ok lah. Anyway Heng is very creative to come out with this idea.Originally posted by tare:hmm... love in another language can or not har?
Beside I did not state very clearly in my rules and regulations. -
~DP prepare EXTRA STRONG Panadol for the judges~Originally posted by MoonIce:got others better than mine leh
yrs also not bad
All the submissions are excellent!
Next year must think of tougher theme for competition. -
poems without any of the 1st 21 letters of the alphabet. only V W X Y and Z allowed.Originally posted by DeadPoet:~DP prepare EXTRA STRONG Panadol for the judges~
All the submissions are excellent!
Next year must think of tougher theme for competition. -
Glad that you like it.Originally posted by ratslen:Will use your suggestion... -
Apa ini???Originally posted by HENG@:Je t'aime mon cheri
Ich liebe dich mein Liebster
Ti amo mi amor
can use or not? 
Cannot use so many French words lah. I know you very romantic but don't have to be so obvious mah. -
Originally posted by HENG@:poems without any of the 1st 21 letters of the alphabet. only V W X Y and Z allowed.
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$$$$Originally posted by pipi & poot-poot:~~ Oooooh ~~
Donations.......= Prize money.......
Lap it all up ! Put it in d Trophy 4 d winner ! -
not all french.Originally posted by DeadPoet:Apa ini???
Cannot use so many French words lah. I know you very romantic but don't have to be so obvious mah.
thats French, German and Spanish. -
So paiseh... I thought all French...Originally posted by HENG@:not all french.
thats French, German and Spanish. -
heh. well thats something new to learn. 1 more to go!Originally posted by DeadPoet:So paiseh... I thought all French... -
wah liao kitty oledi sponsor $50 leh....Originally posted by DeadPoet:$2, $5, $10.
was thinking more like either $30, $20, $10... or $40, $25, $15..... cos NYDC vouchers in $5 or $20... hehehehe -
wah liao i angmoh oledi no good, now must noe french, german and spanish...............Originally posted by HENG@:not all french.
thats French, German and Spanish.
DP can i resign as judge?! -
#1
when once,
you touched me, in the soft of your frangrance.
Though no stars proclaim,
the pain, my pain
still remains.
*edited to meet the 20 words min*
#2
beneath Â…
Let me walk a while alone
Among the sacred rocks and stones
Let me look in vain belief
Upon the beauty of each leaf
There is green in every blade
The tree tops lean providing shade
Maypoles spin in happy sound
All nature's strength around
And there's a horse that feels no pain
Its iron strength to take the strain
Children rock it to and fro
And gaily drink its colour-glow
Above, the sky, devoid of cloud
Thinks not to cast a thunder shroud
Upon this place so full of joy
A field of gold of bliss employ
So, why my heavy heart? You say
When tears would stain
The sights so gay
My brother's dreams once here did soar
Until he died at the hand
Of needless war
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#3
my house Â….
theres a hole in the roof
where the rain comes in,
the moment i close my eyes,
my head begins to spin.
there are windows out high
that stops the blazing sun,
where tears flow out,
to water the flowers out front..
theres a crack in the wall,
where the cold wind blows,
the scars it has left,
on my body does show...
theres a path to the garden
where i have close the door,
after you have walked out,
i am not expecting anybody anymore......
~Add in two more poems with permission from ratinacage~ -
hehe... mebbe should add a clause.. that if judges do not understand the language, the entry is disqualified... might as well deter show-offs and cheats who try to get around the rules that way... ain't fair to other contestants who don't know a third language either.....Originally posted by tare:wah liao i angmoh oledi no good, now must noe french, german and spanish...............
DP can i resign as judge?! -
can i take part?
My Memory
Since the day you left...
forsaking every little memories of us both.
All I have with me are the bits and pieces of us
bits by bits it pieces up to a puzzle in my heart
a picture of us in our happy moments.
Though u have left
but deep in my heart
I have never left you at all
I am there for you regardless of where you be,
who you will be with.
All I know is that feelings i have for you that never dies.
You may have shattered my heart,
but you have once touched my heart deeps down.
You're always in that special place of my heart.
This won't change....no matter what happen in future.
My memory........where u belong.
jus jus [copyright@2004)
specially for Don -
how is being able to use other langs cheating or showing off?Originally posted by KittynMeow:hehe... mebbe should add a clause.. that if judges do not understand the language, the entry is disqualified... might as well deter show-offs and cheats who try to get around the rules that way... ain't fair to other contestants who don't know a third language either.....
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=cheating
cheating is defined as: To violate rules deliberately, as in a game: was accused of cheating at cards.
So to use any other lang is not cheating. vv
i think we learn for a reason, to be able to apply our knowledge yah? and in the due process, everyone here picks up a bit of extra knowledge, its a win-win situation. -
relac. this 3 examples are "i love you, my dear" in the 3 langs. for your reference.Originally posted by tare:wah liao i angmoh oledi no good, now must noe french, german and spanish...............
DP can i resign as judge?! -
but prize must be better also horOriginally posted by DeadPoet:~DP prepare EXTRA STRONG Panadol for the judges~
All the submissions are excellent!
Next year must think of tougher theme for competition.