2nd DPS poetry writing competition :)
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nah... its ok. organise an outing in my name instead n spend it for me!Originally posted by DeadPoet:Don't worry! If you win I will KIV your prize till you are back for holiday!
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Hi pipi our 5th participant!
The judges are going to have a hard time in deciding the winner.
~That is why I donÂ’t want to be the judge. Hee hee~
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Okay! Spend money? No problem!Originally posted by HENG@:nah... its ok. organise an outing in my name instead n spend it for me! -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:Okay! Spend money? No problem!
anyways only 5 peeps? -
What is 5 peeps Mr Mask man?Originally posted by HENG@:
anyways only 5 peeps?
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win liao lor... u organise and shoot the most siong job to usOriginally posted by DeadPoet:Hi pipi our 5th participant!
The judges are going to have a hard time in deciding the winner.
~That is why I donÂ’t want to be the judge. Hee hee~
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Originally posted by tare:win liao lor... u organise and shoot the most siong job to us
Don't like that lah. Hee hee. -
peeps short for persons.Originally posted by DeadPoet:What is 5 peeps Mr Mask man? -
oic! Still early, I hope there are more participants.Originally posted by HENG@:peeps short for persons.
But if really only got five persons also no choice lor. At least better than zero right? -
hehe. yups!Originally posted by DeadPoet:oic! Still early, I hope there are more participants.
But if really only got five persons also no choice lor. At least better than zero right? -
here's a silly one
Luscious your lips
Oh such beauty I adore
Velvety they feel
Elegant to the core
Yummy and so sweet
Only alone my treat
Unabashed, our lips meet
My lips seek yours
Unable to resist such temptation
China in your hands
Happily surrendering to its oblivion
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Win or lose.....secondary worries....Originally posted by DeadPoet:Hi pipi our 5th participant!
The judges are going to have a hard time in deciding the winner.
~That is why I donÂ’t want to be the judge. Hee hee~
Its d intellectual exchange dat upz d feel-good quotient -
French kiss!Originally posted by the Bear:here's a silly one
Luscious your lips
Oh such beauty I adore
Velvety they feel
Elegant to the core
Yummy and so sweet
Only alone my treat
Unabashed, our lips meet
My lips seek yours
Unable to resist such temptation
China in your hands
Happily surrendering to its oblivion -
Yup. It is also a great opportunity to share your poems with the rest of the poets.Originally posted by pipi & poot-poot:Win or lose.....secondary worries....
Its d intellectual exchange dat upz d feel-good quotient
~So this round no prize for the winner!~ -
time to think
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IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT
Dear judges and participants.
IÂ’ve received feedbacks that 31st October 2004 is too long to wait and also some of you will be having your exam in October (just like me). In view of this IÂ’ve decided to bring forward the closing date for submission to 30th September 2004.
I hope this is good news for the majority of you. Please feel free to pm me your feedbacks. I am open to suggestions.
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Yup! Time to be creative!Originally posted by MoonIce:time to think -
oops. im still gone.
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hhppfffmmm.....Originally posted by DeadPoet:French kiss!
nice memories. -
organiser broke liao har?Originally posted by DeadPoet:Yup. It is also a great opportunity to share your poems with the rest of the poets.
~So this round no prize for the winner!~ -
Thanks for the UNIMITED ENTRY... I think it's really all for the SPIRIT yeah??Originally posted by DeadPoet:Yup, As long as it is done before 31st October 2004. > " -
I've posted this before... but I think I just edited a little to enter this for the competition. By the way, please update the Halls of Inspiration.
Name is temporary changed for entry.
The Courting Game
Side A
She told me that her feelings for me would never change,
But deep down inside I know her behaviour strange.
Drawn to her beauty like a moth to a flame,
I walked forward and took her challenge to the game.
The dice rolled in my favour when I began to start,
I wagered everything including my soul and heart.
It was a snake and ladder climb to the top,
Her turn to move forward whenever I stop.
She built hotels and houses on the board,
Spent my money on rents after every round I hoard.
Happiness beams from her after each collection,
My life trudging painfully all for her attention.
Then she decided to invite another player,
Whose aim was to become the best flayer.
She watched as the arbiter while we played the fairy pieces,
His powerful moves forcing me back with viper's hisses.
Eventually I relented as I found the going hard,
My opponent had even drawn the trump card.
I had played straight right into their hands,
And thereafter they had taken away my lands.
The game finally was over,
My heart shattered forever.
There was only one loser in the end,
She will only revert back to be my friend.
Side B
He knew what I told him was the truth,
His actions demanded me to provide the proof.
All I did was to let him have my evidence,
So that it would improve his confidence.
In the beginning he was totally cool,
He did not have any restriction, any rule.
His approaches were daring and interesting,
Every minute I could feel my heart thumping.
My senses told me that he was the one,
Giving me everything I need and all that I want.
He told me my smile was the biggest gift for him,
Hardly did he give me any nonsensical whim.
Soon everything began to shatter,
When my friend and I had a chatter.
He wouldn't believe that he was just another friend,
His behavior dipped and took an extreme bend.
Eventually he wouldn't even listen to my explanation,
Saying all the worst things he could ever mention.
I knew his heart had died since long,
Everything had gone bitterly wrong.
So I told him to go on a different way,
Since there was nothing more for me to say.
He wouldn't listen, he wouldn't trust,
And for me, it wouldn't last. -
Originally posted by ratslen:
Title cannot have the word 'love'
I've posted this before... but I think I just edited a little to enter this for the competition. By the way, please update the Halls of Inspiration.
[b]Love Game
Side A
She told me that her feelings for me would never change,
But deep down inside I know her behaviour strange.
Drawn to her beauty like a moth to a flame,
I walked forward and took her challenge to the game.
The dice rolled in my favour when I began to start,
I wagered everything including my soul and heart.
It was a snake and ladder climb to the top,
Her turn to move forward whenever I stop.
She built hotels and houses on the board,
Spent my money on rents after every round I hoard.
Happiness beams from her after each collection,
My life trudging painfully all for her attention.
Then she decided to invite another player,
Whose aim was to become the best flayer.
She watched as the arbiter while we played the fairy pieces,
His powerful moves forcing me back with viper's hisses.
Eventually I relented as I found the going hard,
My opponent had even drawn the trump card.
I had played straight right into their hands,
And thereafter they had taken away my lands.
The game finally was over,
My heart shattered forever.
There was only one loser in the end,
She will only revert back to be my friend.
Side B
He knew what I told him was the truth,
His actions demanded me to provide the proof.
All I did was to let him have my evidence,
So that it would improve his confidence.
In the beginning he was totally cool,
He did not have any restriction, any rule.
His approaches were daring and interesting,
Every minute I could feel my heart thumping.
My senses told me that he was the one,
Giving me everything I need and all that I want.
He told me my smile was the biggest gift for him,
Hardly did he give me any nonsensical whim.
Soon everything began to shatter,
When my friend and I had a chatter.
He wouldn't believe that he was just another friend,
His behavior dipped and took an extreme bend.
Eventually he wouldn't even listen to my explanation,
Saying all the worst things he could ever mention.
I knew his heart had died since long,
Everything had gone bitterly wrong.
So I told him to go on a different way,
Since there was nothing more for me to say.
He wouldn't listen, he wouldn't trust,
And for me, it wouldn't last. [/b] -
An attempt to write a 3-phrase poem... Of a creature from a fallen love... Based on the 'becomed', the 'process' and the 'beginning'... In a reversed format, which is often the way people would feel, think and recall of a fallen relationship....
Fallen me... I adored...
Winter's snow,
lips cold...
On the mind it blows...
Emptiness which grown...
On a stalk of insanity...
In the house of flaws,
where the wrongs applaused...
Every game a score...
Rules of anxiety...
Morning brings a smile,
sweetness which I dwelled..
Moments which seemed hell...?
Blindness... The curse of eternity... -
Maybe you could suggest a better name?Originally posted by Devil1976:Title cannot have the word 'love'