2nd DPS poetry writing competition :)
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wahaha! i'm honoured lol but hor dun trust me too much lol! i forgot all my rules + metre + all those guidelines to good poetry leow! but hopefully will have time 2 brush up b4 comp #3!Originally posted by DeadPoet:TX, please take note.
I hope my arrangements are agreeable to all poets. Thanks.
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I have faith in you!Originally posted by True_Xerion:wahaha! i'm honoured lol but hor dun trust me too much lol! i forgot all my rules + metre + all those guidelines to good poetry leow! but hopefully will have time 2 brush up b4 comp #3! 
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Aiyah, not you angmoh failed lah. It is I think too much liao. I thought you are talking about a dashing person mah, so must be your hubby loh. Beside, sometimes I also playfully call my wife bunny mah.Originally posted by tare:alamak!!!! read my poem carefully leh..... the last sentence "Wagging gets you away."
wah liao my angmoh failed
~DP wagging away back to his s*it-hole~
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Muhaha I like this much muchOriginally posted by HENG@:My entry.
Title: I Hate You... Not
I hate you not,
I swear I don't.
You infuse me with,
A warm fuzzy glow. -
haha, thanks!Originally posted by choco B:Muhaha I like this much much -
Let go
My heart, I thought it has stopped... But it keeps sending me thumps of pain...
For it runs on the tears you've sent me... Creation of my destiny...
If the sky is really blue,
and the words you've once told me are really true...
What color should I be using to describe my feelings...?
The sky... If it's really dark...
Where should I start to search for the mark?
For the scar that you have left me...
Upon my shoulders it has carried me...
Through an endless route that always leads me back to the start...
That day... If you had told me so...
All this is but a beautiful dream...
At least I could have been less confused...
Holding onto this grip...
Watching it as my heart breaks...
When all I see is only of it slipping away...
Slowly... Dreams...? -
For Carey
All the time when I'm looking at you,
I just can't help this feeling...
For the feeling is so real...
If I were to take it away from me...
I can't comprehense what this world might be...
All the while as I was sitting beside you...
I can just see your heart looking at me...
Smiling all its sweetness...
By a name of Carey,
that's you...
All the troubles I've caused you...
Make me realise that troubles mean nothing to you...
For in your eyes I'm like a star...
Shining a light in every corner of your dreams...
Of all the things I've wanted to tell you...
I just couldn't put them down in words to express myself...
Sometimes they would just send me tears...
So much I've felt, I just can't rationalise them...
For you to understand of all the above...
Everytime I speak the 3 words, it's so true to me and you... -
Togetherness
Distance, it's driving me insane...
While you stood right next to me...
All I see is but just a face...
Emptiness it filled both of us...
Memories, what it might be...
Even as I see you...
Your eyes, they just speak of nothing...
Not a word from you...
Tenderness, a yesterday's dream..
Laying in my arms, eternity it may seems...
But today has just woke us up...
You looked at me... How could it have been easy?
I stood by the sea...
The laughters...
The chatters...
I stood by you but you just isn't here anymore..
It used to be a lonely beach...
Now the loneliness is just all inside of me.... -
Felt like entering a second entry....
*scratches head*
Love story or poem? Love story or poem?
Oops cannot write story... -
Originally posted by tare:
BUBBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kekeeke
i write for fun one....
[b]Who is this that steals my heart?
Big bright eyes,
Sparkle with charm,
Always smiling,
Stealing my heart away.
Long flowing hair,
Shiny and smooth,
You are so fair,
Who can compares to you?
Slender build,
Body so slim,
Not an ounce of fat,
No matter what you eat.
Gags you play,
Destruction you creates,
Correction you escapes,
Wagging gets you away. [/b] -
why not? thot the rules only stated cannot use the word "love". Can still write short story about love if you can omit the word or its variations.Originally posted by ratslen:Felt like entering a second entry....
*scratches head*
Love story or poem? Love story or poem?
Oops cannot write story... -
hahaahaahaaa... i dun call my hubby a dog even playfully lor....Originally posted by DeadPoet:Aiyah, not you angmoh failed lah. It is I think too much liao. I thought you are talking about a dashing person mah, so must be your hubby loh. Beside, sometimes I also playfully call my wife bunny mah.
~DP wagging away back to his s*it-hole~
and hor... err.. he's not dashing.. dun believe ask kitty!!!
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Hey ratslen, hmm... short story ... maybe next time. Let us concentrate on poetry for this round.Originally posted by KittynMeow:why not? thot the rules only stated cannot use the word "love". Can still write short story about love if you can omit the word or its variations.
But you are always welcome to post your love stories in DPS. -
Call him tiger! Roar! Roar!Originally posted by tare:hahaahaahaaa... i dun call my hubby a dog even playfully lor....
and hor... err.. he's not dashing.. dun believe ask kitty!!!
~One fine day we shall meet up for a quite afternoon tea, a really quite one~ -
Dear participants and judges, I have already finalized the rules and regulations for this round poetry writing competition (I hope).
Please take some times to read them.
Thank you. -
err.. he's more like a block of wood than tiger lorOriginally posted by DeadPoet:Call him tiger! Roar! Roar!
~One fine day we shall meet up for a quite afternoon tea, a really quite one~
u mean a quiet afternoon tea? -
Yup a simple quiet afternoon tea/ coffee.Originally posted by tare:err.. he's more like a block of wood than tiger lor
u mean a quiet afternoon tea?
Don't need to talk, just relax and enjoy the peacefulness. -
err.... not very tiger also... think teddy bear sounds more appropriate... hahahaOriginally posted by DeadPoet:Call him tiger! Roar! Roar!
~One fine day we shall meet up for a quite afternoon tea, a really quite one~ -
hehehe okie.... the previous post was cos i din read page 1 and only remembered it said poem or short story... kekekeOriginally posted by DeadPoet:Dear participants and judges, I have already finalized the rules and regulations for this round poetry writing competition (I hope).
Please take some times to read them.
Thank you. -
Might have the 2 poems replaced if I've got the time to write better poems...?>
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After much consideration, IÂ’ve decided that there will be no limitation of submissions.
Remember when it is time to vote, you are voting for your favourite poem NOT your favourite poet. -
Yup, As long as it is done before 31st October 2004.Originally posted by Devil1976:Might have the 2 poems replaced if I've got the time to write better poems...?> -
The words that I yearn to find,
Are often beyond my reach,
To describe the tears I hold,
To allow my soul to preach....
I have a sudden urging,
To see things I've never known,
The maiden flight of a Firefly,
Or when a field is sown.....
I hope to feel the summer,
Transformed to drops of Summer Rain,
I like to see the colours,
On the wick of a dancing flame.....
Without you by my side,
All truth has turned to lies,
Just like the way your back is turned,
Beyond the comprehension of my cries......
This hand that felt your warmth,
Now feels the coldness of a pen,
In translating the things I feel,
Into the writings from my hand.....
I spend my life persuing,
This dream that was supposed to last,
But no man has ever won the wind,
No matter how quick and fast.....
I try to live life better,
With the memories I have in store,
But every moment bears your name,
And in my dreams I have lots more....
So I gave up on the struggles,
Gave in to all the fights,
As I tried hard to go and slumber,
To live through another night.....
Penned By: Pipi
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oops. it only closes 31 oct? hehe i shall be in England by then.
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Don't worry! If you win I will KIV your prize till you are back for holiday!Originally posted by HENG@:oops. it only closes 31 oct? hehe i shall be in England by then.