2nd DPS poetry writing competition :)
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love
where is my muse?
where is she who will guide me?
where is my soulmate
where is she who will walk with me?
i will wait for her
i will surrender to her and give her my heart
i will look for her
i will be with her and from her never part
together nothing can defeat us
together we are strong
together side by side
together where we belong
as one we will journey life
as one we weather any season
as one we will overcome
as one we have a reason
(not for contest tho' coz kinda corny
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the die hard romantic dude...Originally posted by the Bear:love
where is my muse?
where is she who will guide me?
where is my soulmate
where is she who will walk with me?
i will wait for her
i will surrender to her and give her my heart
i will look for her
i will be with her and from her never part
together nothing can defeat us
together we are strong
together side by side
together where we belong
as one we will journey life
as one we weather any season
as one we will overcome
as one we have a reason
(not for contest tho' coz kinda corny ) -
that's me
the hopeless and hopeful oneOriginally posted by skeujin:the die hard romantic dude... -
and we have our 1st contestant!!!!!
btw DP who's the judges har? -
Any suggestions for the choice of judges?Originally posted by tare:and we have our 1st contestant!!!!!
btw DP who's the judges har?
But if Bear is our 1st contestant, then I have to look for another judge liao. -
not for contest coz too corny
and not good as a judge too coz i'm too flaky
put them together i'm corny flaky
okay okay.. enough of the corny jokes
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You are too humble liao lah.Originally posted by the Bear:not for contest coz too corny
and not good as a judge too coz i'm too flaky
put them together i'm corny flaky
okay okay.. enough of the corny jokes
I will discuss with the other moderators on the judges. If they all agree that you will be one of them, you cannot turn us down okay. -
uhh..
i try
you and mods can already!Originally posted by DeadPoet:You are too humble liao lah.
I will discuss with the other moderators on the judges. If they all agree that you will be one of them, you cannot turn us down okay. -
ohh this is priceless! Kelloggs the Bear!!Originally posted by the Bear:not for contest coz too corny
and not good as a judge too coz i'm too flaky
put them together i'm corny flaky
okay okay.. enough of the corny jokes
TX -
Without You (It all begins with you and ends with me)
The girl walked into my life and gave me breath,
Was a gentle breeze that lifted me on my feet.
That tender arms and soothing voice,
Charmed and mesmerized me.
She is the one I am missing bare,
Like right missing left.
Oh dear, her eyes so pretty,
To render me with no wit.
Her magic kept me in her spell,
Yet so my heart will rejoice.
To know her name,
And for her to know he.
If God have a name it will not be fair,
For she is made so dainty.
If there is a place she shall dwell,
Even heaven cannot be the same.
And so he had a chance and walked into her life,
Like a blazing flame meeting ice.
The feeling of rejection stirred strong,
Wrecking all the nerves.
He is the one like the dozen,
In that week that wanted a wife.
Oh dear, he was so foolish,
Yet he still tried thrice.
His incessant kept her in the bleak,
As straightforward rejection is wrong.
Yet leaving his demands not answered,
Is not giving him what he deserves.
If we want answers God will not reason,
For reasons are not what we relish.
If reasons are what we seek,
Then answers had already been served.
So tell me where do I go,
If my breath is taken away?
Alone and I will die,
If she do not belong to me.
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Author's note: Just for fun. -
Dear ratslen, your poem has set a new height for DPS poetry competition. I really hope the rest of the poets will not be discouraged because of this.
Excellent! -
wah liao i thot u copy from where one??!!!!
nothing bad hor.. it's really bery good wor!!! -
tare, want to be one of the judges?Originally posted by tare:wah liao i thot u copy from where one??!!!!
nothing bad hor.. it's really bery good wor!!! -
me har??!!! my angmoh no good also can?Originally posted by DeadPoet:tare, want to be one of the judges? u say can can lor! -
Must ask must ask, because judges are not allow to join in the competition.Originally posted by tare:me har??!!! my angmoh no good also can? u say can can lor! -
"Getting Over"
I'll never seem to understand
why I need you so much
Why I stay up night after night
longing for your touch.
I'll never be able to explain
why I want you so bad
I'd give up practically everything
just to get back what we had.
If I could just have one more night
to have you whispering in my ear
To feel your arms around me
listening to the things I like to hear.
I can't help the fact that I miss you
I can't really tell you why
after everything you've said and done
and how much you've made me cry.
If I could just have the courage
to really try to make things right
I want so bad for you to be
pulling me close and holding me tight.
I don't really understand
why you had to say goodbye
you told me that you'd always need me
I should have known it was a lie.
You let me fall over you
and you knew it at the time
and still you insisted on telling me
that you would always be mine.
Now the only thing I think about
is everything that you do
and the question I keep asking myself
is how can I get over you?
*If its familiar, its a poem i used on a thread donkey years ago* -
huh? no no cannot lah! her works so good, unless she is allowed to post by out-of-competition!!!Originally posted by DeadPoet:tare, want to be one of the judges? -
hahahaa... tis time round the standard bery high.... i just post for fun lor... IF i can write anything out...Originally posted by True_Xerion:huh? no no cannot lah! her works so good, unless she is allowed to post by out-of-competition!!! -
Originally posted by Master -_-:
wah very touching..... reminds me of............... DUN TELL U! hehehee
[b]"Getting Over"
I don't really understand
why you had to say goodbye
you told me that you'd always need me
I should have known it was a lie.
You let me fall over you
and you knew it at the time
and still you insisted on telling me
that you would always be mine.
Now the only thing I think about
is everything that you do
and the question I keep asking myself
is how can I get over you?
*If its familiar, its a poem i used on a thread donkey years ago*
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Originally posted by Master -_-:
Our second participant!
[b]"Getting Over"
I'll never seem to understand
why I need you so much
Why I stay up night after night
longing for your touch.
I'll never be able to explain
why I want you so bad
I'd give up practically everything
just to get back what we had.
If I could just have one more night
to have you whispering in my ear
To feel your arms around me
listening to the things I like to hear.
I can't help the fact that I miss you
I can't really tell you why
after everything you've said and done
and how much you've made me cry.
If I could just have the courage
to really try to make things right
I want so bad for you to be
pulling me close and holding me tight.
I don't really understand
why you had to say goodbye
you told me that you'd always need me
I should have known it was a lie.
You let me fall over you
and you knew it at the time
and still you insisted on telling me
that you would always be mine.
Now the only thing I think about
is everything that you do
and the question I keep asking myself
is how can I get over you?
*If its familiar, its a poem i used on a thread donkey years ago*
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Yup. This round the standard really very high. -
Heehee, read my pm.Originally posted by tare:hahahaa... tis time round the standard bery high.... i just post for fun lor... IF i can write anything out... -
Who else?Originally posted by tare:wah very touching..... reminds me of............... DUN TELL U! hehehee -
hahaaa... u have no idea okie!Originally posted by DeadPoet:Who else? -
You mean someone else other than ur hubby?Originally posted by tare:hahaaa... u have no idea okie! -
of cos lah, duh.... tis poem abt a love lost leh..... hubby still mean no need to get overOriginally posted by DeadPoet:You mean someone else other than ur hubby?