2nd DPS poetry writing competition :)
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Waiting
Waiting...
I waiting...for the truthful one
waiting for one who yearns for me as much as i do.
Waiting...
Waiting for the rightful one
he whom hold the key to my deepest thoughts
waiting for the one to unlock my heart
waiting to held in his arm
with confirmation that we be together till old ages
Waiting..seems ages..
when will i be able to see the light ahead -
[b]Tears/b]
Remember clearly the moment when he left
Remember the tear that significant the pain
the pain that cuts deep into me
Tears was the only form of expression
i could use.
Teardrop that drips down my face and mark the end of our relations
Months had pass and tears has disappear
yet the tears within my heart still flows. -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:
march 05? will be competing from UK then. hope my english would have improved some there.
Don't worry.
I will not be moving them to another thread yet. Like the 1st round, there will be another official thread (after the submission deadline) where I will post all the participating poems for open voting. [b](Each person will have two votes)
The result will also be announced on that thread. I don't want to have too many threads as it can be quite confusing and messy.
After the open voting is over. The judges will move in with 20 votes per judge, i.e. a total of 80 votes. The total votes will decide who is the winner of DPS 2nd poetry writing competition.
I am really looking forward to find out!
~DPS 3rd poetry writing competition will be held in March 2005, should be a interesting one~ [/b] -
Originally posted by jusgal:
OMG WHEN I CLICKED TO OPEN THIS PAGE. I was thinking "waiting, i'm waiting" i'm freaked out now.
[b]Waiting
Waiting...
I waiting...for the truthful one
waiting for one who yearns for me as much as i do.
Waiting...
Waiting for the rightful one
he whom hold the key to my deepest thoughts
waiting for the one to unlock my heart
waiting to held in his arm
with confirmation that we be together till old ages
Waiting..seems ages..
when will i be able to see the light ahead
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heyo lingyOriginally posted by Lingos:OMG WHEN I CLICKED TO OPEN THIS PAGE. I was thinking "waiting, i'm waiting" i'm freaked out now. -
Originally posted by Lingos:OMG WHEN I CLICKED TO OPEN THIS PAGE. I was thinking "waiting, i'm waiting" i'm freaked out now.
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Missing youÂ…
Is life worth living, when youÂ’re not around?
From the emptiness, the silence is deafening, not even a sound.
Is life worth living, when I canÂ’t hold you tight?
Your warm embrace, I long for, in this cold lonely night.
Is life worth living, when your voice I canÂ’t hear?
Like a silent movie, as I close my eyes and pretend you are near.
Is life worth living, when I canÂ’t see your smile?
To indulge in your scent, your warmth, if even for a while.
Is life worth living, when my heart constantly aches?
How much anguish, how much pain, how much till it breaks.
Is life worth living, when lost is all hope?
No more dreams, no more wishes, no longer afloatÂ… -
Welcome skeujin! Ur are participant number 11!
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last minute entry...Originally posted by DeadPoet:Welcome skeujin! Ur are participant number 11! 
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IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT (AGAIN)
Dear poets, due to my own selfish reasons I’ve decided to bring the competition forward to 12th September 2004. The official voting thread will be ready the next day for open voting from 13th – 25th September 2004.
Hopefully the result will be out in early October 2004.
Thanks. -
I just bring forward the deadline. But you are still not too late.Originally posted by skeujin:last minute entry... -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:
winners will be notified by post.
[b]IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT (AGAIN)
Dear poets due to my own selfish reasons, I’ve decided to bring the competition forward to 12th September 2004. The official voting thread will ready the next day for open voting from 13th – 25th September.
Hopefully the result will be out in early October 2004.
Thanks. [/b]
results will be published in The Straits Times, Lian He Zhao Bao and The New Paper on 1st October 2004.
prizes not claimed within two weeks from the announcement of the results or will be snowballed into the next competition. -
Originally posted by skeujin:winners will be notified by post.
results will be published in The Straits Times, Lian He Zhao Bao and The New Paper on 1st October 2004.
prizes not claimed within two weeks from the announcement of the results or will be snowballed into the next competition.
If this day happen, I will be a very very happy man. -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:
yippeee!!
[b]IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT (AGAIN)
Dear poets, due to my own selfish reasons I’ve decided to bring the competition forward to 12th September 2004. The official voting thread will be ready the next day for open voting from 13th – 25th September 2004.
Hopefully the result will be out in early October 2004.
Thanks. [/b]
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I get the hint in your 'Waiting' poem.Originally posted by jusgal:yippeee!!
So I know you will surly be very happy with the change of deadline. -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:I get the hint in your 'Waiting' poem.
So I know you will surly be very happy with the change of deadline.
i never hint u.... make mi so gulity -
Oh no, deadline bright forward *panics* Brain juice still dry leh !___!
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Originally posted by jusgal:
i never hint u.... make mi so gulity
Joking joking. I have my own selfish reasons lah. -
Don't worry still got 14 more days to go, I will wait for you.Originally posted by choco B:Oh no, deadline bright forward *panics* Brain juice still dry leh !___! -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:
think better update tis on page 1 also....
[b]IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT (AGAIN)
Dear poets, due to my own selfish reasons I’ve decided to bring the competition forward to 12th September 2004. The official voting thread will be ready the next day for open voting from 13th – 25th September 2004.
Hopefully the result will be out in early October 2004.
Thanks. [/b]
and hor.... so many poems!!!!!
btw u haven't set the prizes yet leh..... shall we have 1st, 2nd and 3rd prizes? esp. since tis time round more participants? -
Already updated it in page one liao.Originally posted by tare:think better update tis on page 1 also....
and hor.... so many poems!!!!!
btw u haven't set the prizes yet leh..... shall we have 1st, 2nd and 3rd prizes? esp. since tis time round more participants?
Regarding prizes I have not decide yet. I will discuss with the rest of the mods on a later date.
See how...
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hehehe... tell me quick while i still have some cash.....Originally posted by DeadPoet:Already updated it in page one liao.
Regarding prizes I have not decide yet. I will discuss with the rest of the mods on a later date.
See how... -
I am waiting for Thursday TOTO.Originally posted by tare:hehehe... tell me quick while i still have some cash..... -
erf! im thinking of something to write
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Sorry pal, still not early enough to pass you the prize (If you win lah).Originally posted by HENG@:erf! im thinking of something to write