HeavenTears
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HeavenTears
Heaven Tears are tears of sadness the god has for the human species,
Tears of saddess that may harm the people by lighting, landslides...
Yet the heaven tears like love that has hurt many,
has also been desired by the human species for their land, for crops, for drinking just like love that hurts us so much but yet desired who those that has been hurt to be enhance fully in it once again.
Rains are a form of god expression of love towards life.
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Nice piece of prose there.
I am really honour to have your first post in DPS.
Want to give it a try and rewrite it as a poem? It should be quite easy since you already have a good concept to start with.
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HeavenTears
Heaven Tears,
tears of sadness.
Tears might harm by lighting, landslides...
heaven tears like love that has hurt many,
desired by the human species who those that yearns to be enhanced once again.
Tears of true love that warms one's heart.
hurtful as it might,
beautiful as it seems.
dangerous as it could,
yearned by many