Poetry exercise :)
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Originally posted by LazerLordz:
Cruel reality in the world of entertainment ...
[b]Pretty, salacious and cocksure.
Only 18, yet a face of the world's runway
Everything she wanted, fame and more
Till one day
Ignorance arose anew
Claiming the waif unbeknownst to all
Verily I say,
Ecstasy seduced her
Rolling like a stone
Silently , stealthily
Engraving its claws on her clammy bosom.[/b]
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right now, i wish i can use a crowbar to panel this piece of crap who came up with a program to "simplify" our job... and ended up complicating it..
and since it's an IT thing, the bosses who don't have to use it are enamoured by it...
it's useless, it's dangerous, it causes more work and leaves a lot to be fought over... but no one up there listens to the ground coz they can score points with it...
alas..Originally posted by DeadPoet:Aiming this poem towards your boss?
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Totally agree with that. Those jokers at the top are totally out of touch with those on the ground/ field.Originally posted by the Bear:but no one up there listens to the ground coz they can score points with it...
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Perturbed he stands, staring out into the skies.
Overhead as the twin suns sets,
Etching long shadows on wind-blasted sands.
Troubled, as he hands the baby boy over.
Is this the Galaxy's last hope?
Can this boy bring balance to the Force?
Veils of evil swirl around the Empire,
Enslaving the entire Galaxy.
Relishing the death and destruction,
Scant could they have know or guessed.
End is near with the coming of Skywalker.
something to do with my fav movie. STAR WARS!
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Cool!Originally posted by HENG@:Perturbed he stands, staring out into the skies.
Overhead as the twin suns sets,
Eteching long shadows on wind-blasted sands.
Troubled, as he hands the baby boy over.
Is this the Galaxy's last hope?
Can this boy bring balance to the Force?
Veils of evil swirl around the Empire,
Enslaving the entire Galaxy.
Relishing the death and destruction,
Scant could they have know or guessed.
End is near with the coming of Skywalker.
something to do with my fav movie. STAR WARS! 
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EPISODE III IS COMING!!!! YAYYYY!
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1st time writing....
Problems are created by our mind
Often we never take the time
Ego, ignorance, pride and hatred
Things we always take for granted
I shall always be mindful of my actions
Correcting myself not in other directions
Vengeance comes from anger
Even the wise are prone to suffer
Remove such mental afflictions
Stop experiencing such disturbing conceptions
Enjoy ultimate liberation -
Originally posted by Origami:
wah!!! IMPRESSED!!!! *clap clap clap*
1st time writing....
[b]Problems are created by our mind
Often we never take the time
Ego, ignorance, pride and hatred
Things we always take for granted
I shall always be mindful of my actions
Correcting myself not in other directions
Vengeance comes from anger
Even the wise are prone to suffer
Remove such mental afflictions
Stop experiencing such disturbing conceptions
Enjoy ultimate liberation[/b]
this is so good and philosophical too!!!! -
You are really one hardcore fan!Originally posted by HENG@:EPISODE III IS COMING!!!! YAYYYY! -
Originally posted by Origami:
Wow, enlightening stuff.
1st time writing....
[b]Problems are created by our mind
Often we never take the time
Ego, ignorance, pride and hatred
Things we always take for granted
I shall always be mindful of my actions
Correcting myself not in other directions
Vengeance comes from anger
Even the wise are prone to suffer
Remove such mental afflictions
Stop experiencing such disturbing conceptions
Enjoy ultimate liberation[/b]
Welcome Origami! Nice to have you here.
Every time someone new (in DPS) posted here I get so excited.
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Originally posted by DeadPoet:You are really one hardcore fan!
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me too esp. frm east side hunk.... now this one definitely ain't a himbo!!!Originally posted by DeadPoet:Wow, enlightening stuff.
Welcome Origami! Nice to have you here.
Every time someone new (in DPS) posted here I get so excited.
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Originally posted by tare:me too esp. frm east side hunk.... now this one definitely ain't a himbo!!!
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You really know many hunks in sgforums hor.Originally posted by tare:me too esp. frm east side hunk.... now this one definitely ain't a himbo!!! -
Mind and Communication
Playing with your communication
Objection to the languages
Escape from the illusion you facing and
Thinking if it is a way of vention
Ignore all the troubles in your mind and
Concern with the person beside you
Verify with the true thoughts you had
Express them through a poem
Reassure that nothing is impossible
Sum up all your courage and
Emerge them into one -
Wah a very 'technical' poem. Hee hee.Originally posted by asplooh:Mind and Communication
Playing with your communication
Objection to the languages
Escape from the illusion you facing and
Thinking if it is a way of vention
Ignore all the troubles in your mind and
Concern with the person beside you
Verify with the true thoughts you had
Express them through a poem
Reassure that nothing is impossible
Sum up all your courage and
Emerge them into one
By the way, 3rd sentence, do you think this will sound better?
'Escape from the illusion you are facing and'
Just a suggestion. -
Poetry of yesteryear and,
Olden songs, sings of~
Everlasting voice of~
Tis unspoken heart.
Is it the autumn rain?
Courting a slow saddness within.
Varily, understandably.
Everything has gone, deaf.
Resultant realities enticing, luring~
Signaling tis ghost within~
Everything is gone, mute.