The Magic of Love ....author JG

• jusgal

  19 Jul 04, 10:53

  THE MAGIC OF LOVE.
  
  Love like a Rose,
  lights us up in its beauty.
  immerse in the beauty of the rose whereby failing to see beyond the beauty of the rose, its hidden and ugly thorns which cuts deeply into the hearts of young maidens...leaving fear and pains.
  
  Yet just the thoughts of it beauty,
  ones who was once hurt yearns for the beauty of rose to embross upon them once again.
  
  Hence, the power of love remains undefeated again due to the very much feared feeling of loneliness.
  
  
• foga

  19 Jul 04, 11:03

  
  
  
• pipi & poot-poot

  19 Jul 04, 11:16

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• DeadPoet

  20 Jul 04, 00:24

  Originally posted by jusgal:

  THE MAGIC OF LOVE.
  
  Love like a Rose,
  lights us up in its beauty.
  immerse in the beauty of the rose whereby failing to see beyond the beauty of the rose, its hidden and ugly thorns which cuts deeply into the hearts of young maidens...leaving fear and pains.
  
  Yet just the thoughts of it beauty,
  ones who was once hurt yearns for the beauty of rose to embross upon them once again.
  
  Hence, the power of love remains undefeated again due to the very much feared feeling of loneliness.
  
  

  There is a poem very similar to your prose. Just canÂ’t remember which is
  it Â…
  
  Nice piece of work.
• jusgal

  20 Jul 04, 10:07

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  There is a poem very similar to your prose. Just canÂ’t remember which is
  it Â…
  
  Nice piece of work.

  thanks...u say wanna see my work mah
• DeadPoet

  21 Jul 04, 00:27

  Originally posted by jusgal:

  thanks...u say wanna see my work mah

  Yup. So gald you post here.
  
  Want to try writing it as a poem?