Poem : Eons
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Eons.
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Silent in the misty dreams
That life hath weaved
Around me and you.
I stand alone,
Upon the rostrum of the sun;
And your face, blessed
With the serenity of the ages
Gazes at me
Â…..quizzical, as if
Searching for answers
That I have plenty
But you didnÂ’t seem to want.
Where I once tread,
Now there is only death
And the void which permeates the
Salty earth
Is named after my own soul
For I am one with nothing.
Black ravens flood my eyes
They bear your sigil,
Your command is holy writ
Sealed by an oath
Reaching through the eons,
Companion to the Old Ones.
Forsooth you were there before
Time.
Your smile radiates
And heals me.
Painful indeed
To see your era slain
By the miscreant called time;
Some cheap rebel who
Seeks to usurp your regency
Within me.
And I shall never again
Bow to your throne
When they replaced you
With a false Queen. -
Originally posted by LazerLordz:
very nice!
[b]Eons.
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Silent in the misty dreams
That life hath weaved
Around me and you.
I stand alone,
Upon the rostrum of the sun;
And your face, blessed
With the serenity of the ages
Gazes at me
Â…..quizzical, as if
Searching for answers
That I have plenty
But you didnÂ’t seem to want.
Where I once tread,
Now there is only death
And the void which permeates the
Salty earth
Is named after my own soul
For I am one with nothing.
Black ravens flood my eyes
They bear your sigil,
Your command is holy writ
Sealed by an oath
Reaching through the eons,
Companion to the Old Ones.
Forsooth you were there before
Time.
Your smile radiates
And heals me.
Painful indeed
To see your era slain
By the miscreant called time;
Some cheap rebel who
Seeks to usurp your regency
Within me.
And I shall never again
Bow to your throne
When they replaced you
With a false Queen.
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Thanks.Are you a poet too?
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not a professional one...but i have taken English Literature back in secondary school. so..i do have interest in poems.Originally posted by LazerLordz:Thanks.Are you a poet too? -
Heh.im no pro either.I took Lit from Sec One till the 'A' levels.Can say that it had a profound impact on my thinking.
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yes..me too! i love poems...Originally posted by LazerLordz:Heh.im no pro either.I took Lit from Sec One till the 'A' levels.Can say that it had a profound impact on my thinking. -
Want to share your poems with us?Originally posted by malarica:yes..me too! i love poems...
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LazerLordzÂ’s poems are usually very in-depth and philosophical The words he used are very carefully chosen. Because of that, sometimes you need to read it a few times to get some ideas of what he is trying to convey. (Sometimes reading a few times still donÂ’t get what he is trying to say, no offend hor )
But this is his style. And regardless whether you understand the poem, you cannot deny that they are smooth and well structured. You canÂ’t help feeling there is something more in his poems and that make you want to read them again and again.
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We are all poets at heart.Originally posted by LazerLordz:Heh.im no pro either.I took Lit from Sec One till the 'A' levels.Can say that it had a profound impact on my thinking. -
Now my ego is gonna burst.Hee
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Really luv the flow of this particular poem!!
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Now my ego is gonna burst.Hee
you're too modest lah