to my love..

• shifeng

  13 Apr 04, 19:40

  the room looks odd
  the night seems dark
  as i off my light the darkness crept
  on to my body
  making it shiver
  i realise
  i can lose anyone
  i can lose everything
  i can lose to the world
  but i cant lose you
  for u are everything to me
  future seems tough
  the past seems rough
  my nocturnal soul searching
  for u in the darkness
  no matter where you are
  deep in my heart
  where the image of you are
• shifeng

  13 Apr 04, 19:41

  The dark grey sky
  i wanna fly
  my bright wide smile
  a mask of mine
  to hide my cries
  what should i do
  decisions are fool
  to make human like a tool
  no matter what will come
  i am ready here to help you overcome
  
• shifeng

  13 Apr 04, 19:41

  In the lonely night of cold,
  my memory as hard as gold,
  no matter what the love inside me will not unfold,
  things will come as go,
  but i hope u will never go,
  it looks like a dream which is so lovely,
  i hope that i will fall into it blindly,
  even though i might be hurt excruciatingly,
  i wont have any regrets internally,
  my love for u, will be inside me eternally
  
• shifeng

  14 Apr 04, 09:07

  the night seems cold
  my heart seems old
  the night will be beautiful
  as long as u are still with me
  the stars are bright
  ur smiles are sweet
  in my memories
  there are only u
  
• Ah Ma

  14 Apr 04, 09:08

  wow... alot of poets here
• shifeng

  14 Apr 04, 09:10

  i dun consider me as 1.. i juz love to write when i have the feeling.. esp when i am moody, or heard sth sentimental..
  
  oh well..
• tha_schizophrenic

  14 Apr 04, 20:54

  haha ^5 me working on my poem too thou dun rhyme haha :p when that time comes muz support me okay! bring banners whatever also can
• coolger03

  15 Apr 04, 01:40

  Originally posted by tha_schizophrenic:

  haha ^5 me working on my poem too thou dun rhyme haha :p when that time comes muz support me okay! bring banners whatever also can

  when will that be??
  i need time to prepare the banner leh...
• Danisdead101times

  15 Apr 04, 01:50

  hm...good poems...
• True_Xerion

  15 Apr 04, 02:18

  Originally posted by shifeng:

  i dun consider me as 1.. i juz love to write when i have the feeling.. esp when i am moody, or heard sth sentimental..
  
  oh well..

  shifeng> nice nice I'm sure DP will have good things to say abt ur work when he gets back online
  
  TX
• DeadPoet

  15 Apr 04, 03:22

  Originally posted by shifeng:

  the room looks odd
  the night seems dark
  as i off my light the darkness crept
  on to my body
  making it shiver
  i realise
  i can lose anyone
  i can lose everything
  i can lose to the world
  but i cant lose you
  for u are everything to me
  future seems tough
  the past seems rough
  my nocturnal soul searching
  for u in the darkness
  no matter where you are
  deep in my heart
  where the image of you are

  Your writing style remind me of someone. Not really the same but close.
  
  I really like those lines in red, darkness becoming alive and 'crept on to my body, making it shiver', great imagination.
  
  I better turn on the light when I sleep tonight.
  
  
• DeadPoet

  15 Apr 04, 03:24

  Originally posted by Ah Ma:

  wow... alot of poets here

  Ah Ma, write a poem also leh.
• tha_schizophrenic

  15 Apr 04, 18:32

  Originally posted by coolger03:

  when will that be??
  i need time to prepare the banner leh...

  haha looooong loooong time lols. see if i dare to post nort lor. im really poor in translating my feelings?