Originally posted by J'da:
Never say I love you
If you don't really care
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Never talk of feelings
If they aren't really there
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Never hold my hand
If you mean to break my heart
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Never say forever
If you ever plan to part
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Never look into my eyes
If you are telling me a lie
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Never say hello
If you think you'll say goodbye
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Never say that I'm THE one
If you dream of more than me
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Never lock up my heart
If you don't have the key
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Hey, simple yet straight to the point. Good work.
Just curious, why not combine the first two lines with the 3rd and 4th lines to become a whole unit, and so on?
Just my view.