Congratulation to Keii & tare!
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Congratulation to Keii on winning the Open Category & tare on winning the JudgesÂ’ Choice Category! The rest of the contestants have also done very well especially Delphian & Master -_- . Give yourself a pat on the shoulder, well done!
I would also like to thank all participants for their submissions. Keep writing and don't forget to participate in our next contest in Jan/Feb 2008!
Be the first poet in sgforums to win both categories!
And for those of you who have voted, a big THANK YOU to you!!! Please continue to support us!!!
As requested
Poem #15
I wake up, drenched in cold sweat
By Keii
I wake up, drenched in cold sweat.
From a horrible nightmare,
melancholic and despondent.
Why am I, inflicted with this pain.
Pangs of remorse, repeating.
Like a broken tape, playing.
I reach in, rustling through my drawer.
Through overdue paperwork,
expired coupons and magazines.
What is this, burning sensation?
The warmth of leather, cozying.
The coldness of metal, tingling.
I take out, what seems to be a revolver.
Locked and loaded,
awaiting to claim it's next prey.
When was it, that I acquired this?
Might in my hands, empowering.
Freedom to wield, tempting.
I walk around, randomly releasing bolts.
Into innocent bystanders,
a momentary span of enjoyment.
Who am I? Unable to control myself.
Unbearable suffering, consuming.
A sudden surge of pain, reacting.
I fall asleep, oblivious to my surroudings.
Too late to realise,
how many lives I cruelly took.
Where am I? Descending into darkness.
Feels like eternity, relaxing.
I found my solace, comforting. Poem #11
Serpent in Disgust
By tare
the smell of
freshly steamed buns
was too alluring
a bite into it
my stomach turned
my taste buds protest
in an uproar
what lousy
meat bun is this
tasting like cardboard?
i must rinse my mouth
to rid of its foulness
the smell of fresh mint
fills my toothbrush
and mouth
the television in the room
is broadcasting
about a certain toothpaste
i stared at the tube
and vomited
flopped onto the bed
stared at the ceiling
a few fine cracks
stared back at me
then a few dust of cement fell
onto my started face
as the cracks enlarged
and started to crumble
i ran out of the room
and the hotel
the awakening dragon
turns out to be
a serpent
in disgust. -
shd post the winning entries here...
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Congrats!
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i was tare's inspiration
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Yay! Votes were neck to neck. Thanks for those who voted and please continue to support MPC. Congrats to tare for winning Judge's Choice.
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Congratulations to Keii and tare! *pulls party popper*
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congrats!!
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Okok.. time for plagiarism for my Lit exams..
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Congratulations to Keii and Tare.
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gong xi gong xi
so where's my prize? -
GONG XI GONG XI~!~!
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congrats!
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i... i... i... WAT??!!!
*silence*
okie, i'm totally shocked... my silly poem caught the hearts of the judges
thank you thank you all!! i will cont'd to write my silly poems
congrats to keii!!! -
Congrats winners. Well done!
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congrats to keii and tare
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You are a serpent in disgust?Originally posted by euc:i was tare's inspiration -
congratz congratz!!
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Who wants to be the first poet to win both categories? Hmm... must set new rules liao.Originally posted by Keii:Yay! Votes were neck to neck. Thanks for those who voted and please continue to support MPC. Congrats to tare for winning Judge's Choice. -
*me stay away*Originally posted by MooKu:Congratulations to Keii and tare! *pulls party popper* -
Okay noted. Will keep an eye on you in the future.Originally posted by Gackt247:Okok.. time for plagiarism for my Lit exams.. -
wow i attracted dsnake
how come i only got 1 vote
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The judges were in a good mood except for Cheong Lee San.Originally posted by tare:i... i... i... WAT??!!!
*silence*
okie, i'm totally shocked... my silly poem caught the hearts of the judges
thank you thank you all!! i will cont'd to write my silly poems
congrats to keii!!! -
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damn lag -
Dude, you are improving. Keep it up. Get all three votes the next time round.Originally posted by Master -_-:wow i attracted dsnake
how come i only got 1 vote
