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• ironoxideman

  8 Jul 07, 15:29

  its another ugly day
  laughs
  thinking how close tears are
  to happiness and pain
  another ugly day
  (hahahaha)
  reaches for the phone and turns away
  (blah ahahaha and its nothing to talk about)
  
  it is a nice place
  and full of good people
  but i'm just cursed...
  
  i love you all Bye Bye.
  
  another ugly day
  (hahahaha)
  sits up on the chair and goes out the door
  
  starts the car
  hits the highway
  and hesitates...
  a nice car
  because it is a very nice car,
  and a shame to waste it.
• InnoHippo

  9 Jul 07, 12:01

  planning a suicide?
  
  
• DeadPoet

  9 Jul 07, 19:09

  Originally posted by InnoHippo:

  planning a suicide?
  
  

  I hope not.
  
  But I like the way the author arranged the lines. The ending also quite unexpected.
• Bluesky_Liz

  9 Jul 07, 20:54

  At least the end is a little optimistic. I get like that sometimes, sometimes a week or month is just so bad, and one feels most rejected by all. I get like, I would jump off this building, but I don't want to make a mess downstairs and the poor nice uncle will have more work...
  
  Seriously, sometimes you grasp at whatever keeps you around, even stuff that seems rather trival and it even sounds kinda funny.
• DeadPoet

  9 Jul 07, 21:18

  Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:

  I get like that sometimes, sometimes a week or month is just so bad, and one feels most rejected by all. I get like, I would jump off this building, but I don't want to make a mess downstairs and the poor nice uncle will have more work...
  
  

  
• Bluesky_Liz

  9 Jul 07, 22:07

  It sounds funny if you've never been down deep in the pit. But to me, it's a small step in avoiding a total surrender. Oh yes, I had those and darker thoughts when I was younger. These days I've learnt to be a bit more easy about stuff, just do my best.
  
• InnoHippo

  10 Jul 07, 09:49

  Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:

  At least the end is a little optimistic. I get like that sometimes, sometimes a week or month is just so bad, and one feels most rejected by all. I get like, I would jump off this building, but I don't want to make a mess downstairs and the poor nice uncle will have more work...
  
  Seriously, sometimes you grasp at whatever keeps you around, even stuff that seems rather trival and it even sounds kinda funny.

  jumping off a building is such an "ugly" end .........
  
  never never take this option ........
• tare

  10 Jul 07, 16:59

  Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:

  It sounds funny if you've never been down deep in the pit. But to me, it's a small step in avoiding a total surrender. Oh yes, I had those and darker thoughts when I was younger. These days I've learnt to be a bit more easy about stuff, just do my best.
  

  same here.... was so bad i just wanna jump. then i thot of my dog. no one to take care of him. no one will even noe he's alone at home!!
  
  so no jump
• DeadPoet

  10 Jul 07, 21:32

  Originally posted by tare:

  same here.... was so bad i just wanna jump. then i thot of my dog. no one to take care of him. no one will even noe he's alone at home!!
  
  so no jump

  
• DeadPoet

  10 Jul 07, 21:33

  DonÂ’t jump. Come see me, I give you counseling.