Who am i?

• ChingAlvin

  22 Jun 07, 18:20

  Who am I?
  
  Contemplative, forlorn, my naked mind,
  Phony front, deception, even oneself,
  As mesmerizing roses, drawing minds,
  Gorgeous deception, dwelling thorns reside.
  
  Chameleon, environs alteration,
  Oneself, situation alteration,
  Changes when changes occur,
  Traits within traits concurred.
  
  Persona, creation, a play,
  Situations, a set, the men,
  Scenes change, along I play,
  Elements, creations, in hand
  
  Who am I, IÂ’m just a coy!
  Dummies fit, for different plays.
  
  Written in school for school work purpose.. The later part seems too rush but lazy edit.
  
  Can this be the entry for the poet contest? Standard 14 line sonnet.
• DeadPoet

  22 Jun 07, 19:43

  Not yet lah. Wait for my announcement in early July.
• Bluesky_Liz

  22 Jun 07, 20:49

  Besides, the poetry competition entries are often posted without names of the authors. Entries are sent to DP via PM, and he posts it in a for-competition thread. That way no one knows who wrote what until the results.
  
  Interesting piece. I think it sometimes take a long time to find out who you yourself really are. Sometimes a lifetime.
• InnoHippo

  23 Jun 07, 00:05

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Not yet lah. Wait for my announcement in early July.

  the impatient waits for no one
  
  
• DeadPoet

  23 Jun 07, 10:52

  Originally posted by InnoHippo:

  the impatient waits for no one
  
  

  Then why not you take over the contest? Then I can relax a bit.
• InnoHippo

  23 Jun 07, 11:03

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Then why not you take over the contest? Then I can relax a bit.

  i take over the relax part
  
  
• DeadPoet

  23 Jun 07, 11:18

  Originally posted by InnoHippo:

  i take over the relax part
  
  

  Like that you win lor.
• InnoHippo

  24 Jun 07, 12:08

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Like that you win lor.

  think win-win mah
  
  
• tare

  24 Jun 07, 17:37

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Like that you win lor.

  competition not yet started got winner liao...
  
  DP told u must put the rules and regulations up 1st.. wait everyone post their entries, how? *piak DP's forehead*
• DeadPoet

  25 Jun 07, 19:54

  Originally posted by InnoHippo:

  think win-win mah
  
  

  Any suggestions?
• DeadPoet

  25 Jun 07, 19:56

  Originally posted by tare:

  competition not yet started got winner liao...
  
  DP told u must put the rules and regulations up 1st.. wait everyone post their entries, how? *piak DP's forehead*

  This weekend should have time to put them up.
• DeadPoet

  1 Jul 07, 01:09

  Hello ChingAlvin, think you can write another poem for the contest and send it to me by pm? Thanks.