Kindergarten
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You are most welcome.Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:Thanks DP, it is exactly the kind of help I need. I'm not very good with describing complex scenes.
Open umbrellas -- (edit: got it) you've made me want to rethink it just by pointing it out. I might try to show the mothers' excitement and/or anxiety using something else less boring and predictable.
Thanks thanks thanks again!!
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Well when the mood is right, write!Originally posted by tare:hehee.. thank u.. it's been so long since i wrote anything, even if it's my usual silly poems
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If you are interested in describing the various emotions, let me know.Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:Thanks DP, it is exactly the kind of help I need. I'm not very good with describing complex scenes.
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my mood recently is HORRIBLE... and i hate to write depressing poems or tat which will expose too much abt myselfOriginally posted by DeadPoet:Well when the mood is right, write! -
Used to be able to write really rip-your-guts-out rants, but now...not so. After a while I realise it didn't help in any way, and only made me very emo and more depressed than ever.
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Will keep your offer in mind.Originally posted by DeadPoet:If you are interested in describing the various emotions, let me know. 
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signs of maturityOriginally posted by Bluesky_Liz:Used to be able to write really rip-your-guts-out rants, but now...not so. After a while I realise it didn't help in any way, and only made me very emo and more depressed than ever.
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Having fun?Originally posted by Botter:
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Just rolling along I suppose
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Look out for that ... clift ...Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:Just rolling along I suppose 