nice Forum
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I didnt know there's this forum here. =D
Is this writing real?
If reading makes this real,
Our sight made it real.
Now close your eyes,
Are these real no more?
If eyes see differently,
And brains process differently,
Is this, still as real?
Suppose you canÂ’t see,
Suppose you donÂ’t smell.
Suppose you canÂ’t hear,
Suppose you arenÂ’t you.
Would this, still be real?
Now if I create into space,
Someone just like you.
You see, you hear, maybe even touch,
Do those make it real?
Sadness, happiness, anger,
We canÂ’t see, donÂ’t smell nor hear,
But emotions we all feel.
We cry, we smile we frown,
ArenÂ’t they all so true?
If senses equals to real,
Emotions canÂ’t be real!
Yet we react when we feel,
DoesnÂ’t that make it real?
Ah! Now I think I know.
The brain creates all thatÂ’s real.
No, wait! Is that really true?
Now convince yourself this “truth”,
What you now see is not real.
Armed with the new “truth”,
Close your eyes for a moment.
Then open your eyes and look,
If brains create reality,
ShouldnÂ’t this writing be gone?
I guess, “reality” is really real.
We donÂ’t sense to make things real,
Nor our brains make things real.
But if we canÂ’t sense or think,
How do we know that “it” is real?
How do we know reality, is real?
If the mind creates reality,
Can you create a dollar bill?
If senses creates what is real,
Are emotions and thoughts unreal?
If “reality” is really real,
How can we tell without our minds?
These questions we ponder,
About what is real.
But will an explanation,
Will be accepted as the absolute truth? -
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Farewell I shall bid,
The heart which fails to beat.
Fallen to defeat,
Feelings come with it.
Feelings of defeat,
Ice rains on skin.
Then all began to melt,
Cold rain on the skin
Torment, anguish and cold,
Manifests, unable to hold.
Like soldiers invading a hold,
Battling till kings fall!
First they flee their fleet,
Then fight back from below.
Farewells, why I bid,
To climb up from down low.
From the lessons of defeat,
I shall be reborn.
When the day comes to me,
Return the smiles once worn. -
So the people posts their writing here?Originally posted by WiNtEr'SkiLL: -
How philosophical....?Originally posted by ChingAlvin:I didnt know there's this forum here. =D
Is this writing real?
If reading makes this real,
Our sight made it real.
Now close your eyes,
Are these real no more?
If eyes see differently,
And brains process differently,
Is this, still as real?
Suppose you canÂ’t see,
Suppose you donÂ’t smell.
Suppose you canÂ’t hear,
Suppose you arenÂ’t you.
Would this, still be real?
Now if I create into space,
Someone just like you.
You see, you hear, maybe even touch,
Do those make it real?
Sadness, happiness, anger,
We canÂ’t see, donÂ’t smell nor hear,
But emotions we all feel.
We cry, we smile we frown,
ArenÂ’t they all so true?
If senses equals to real,
Emotions canÂ’t be real!
Yet we react when we feel,
DoesnÂ’t that make it real?
Ah! Now I think I know.
The brain creates all thatÂ’s real.
No, wait! Is that really true?
Now convince yourself this “truth”,
What you now see is not real.
Armed with the new “truth”,
Close your eyes for a moment.
Then open your eyes and look,
If brains create reality,
ShouldnÂ’t this writing be gone?
I guess, “reality” is really real.
We donÂ’t sense to make things real,
Nor our brains make things real.
But if we canÂ’t sense or think,
How do we know that “it” is real?
How do we know reality, is real?
If the mind creates reality,
Can you create a dollar bill?
If senses creates what is real,
Are emotions and thoughts unreal?
If “reality” is really real,
How can we tell without our minds?
These questions we ponder,
About what is real.
But will an explanation,
Will be accepted as the absolute truth?
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Hi devil, i been always interested in philosophical stuffs. More of reading. Newbie in poetry so duo duo zhi jiaoOriginally posted by Devil1976:How philosophical....? -
Welcome to the forum, Alvin.
Yep this is place for posting writings - poetry or prose, both are welcomed.
Reality gets more confusing the more you question it, imo.
Keep scribbling. -
Welcome to MPC ChingAlvin!Originally posted by ChingAlvin:So the people posts their writing here?
And yes we do post our writings here. -
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Hey we are all newbie in poetry.Originally posted by ChingAlvin:Hi devil, i been always interested in philosophical stuffs. More of reading. Newbie in poetry so duo duo zhi jiao
Do feel free to look around and read those sticky topics if you have the time. And if you have any questions regarding the subject, you are most welcome to pm me or post a topic here. -
Yeah sure no problem man.Originally posted by DeadPoet:Hey we are all newbie in poetry.
Do feel free to look around and read those sticky topics if you have the time. And if you have any questions regarding the subject, you are most welcome to pm me or post a topic here. -
What is it you want?Originally posted by turbo_drift: 
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FierceOriginally posted by DeadPoet:What is it you want? -
No lah fierce is thisOriginally posted by ChingAlvin:Fierce
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CA welcome! yes tis is a nice plc to put down ur writings... poems, prose, short stories...
btw DP dun bluff!! YOU newbie in poetry??!!! -
I think you're cool!Originally posted by ChingAlvin:Hi devil, i been always interested in philosophical stuffs. More of reading. Newbie in poetry so duo duo zhi jiao
Just that not so many people I know who write philosophical poems nowadays...? -
i dun always write philosophical poems, just when the inspiration comes! =)Originally posted by Devil1976:I think you're cool!
Just that not so many people I know who write philosophical poems nowadays...? -
I newbie in poetry lah.Originally posted by tare:CA welcome! yes tis is a nice plc to put down ur writings... poems, prose, short stories...
btw DP dun bluff!! YOU newbie in poetry??!!! 
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Write whatever comes to your mind and be honest about it.Originally posted by ChingAlvin:i dun always write philosophical poems, just when the inspiration comes! =) -
COOL ENOUGH for the 1st post!Originally posted by ChingAlvin:i dun always write philosophical poems, just when the inspiration comes! =)