HELP with sentence structuring!!

• Devil1976

  6 Feb 07, 17:41

  Seems like SPACE doesn't really work in SGFORUMS.. Sometimes find it HARD to truly express my poems especially of its layout...
  
  Any help with that?
• stellazio

  6 Feb 07, 17:43

  eh u compose somewhere else, den print ss lohz..
• Ito_^

  6 Feb 07, 17:44

  huhwadutokingspaceworksperfectlyfine
• Darkness_hacker99

  6 Feb 07, 17:56

  Originally posted by Ito_^:

  huhwadutokingspaceworksperfectlyfine

  yalorspaceworkingfineleh
• Darkness_hacker99

  6 Feb 07, 17:58

  MYCAPSISWORKINGFINETOO
• Devil1976

  6 Feb 07, 17:59

  Originally posted by stellazio:

  eh u compose somewhere else, den print ss lohz..

  So troublesome... Then I might as well put it up elsewhere...?
  
  But it's not really like I would bother to lah...?
• The man who was death

  6 Feb 07, 19:42

  use...........for spacing
• Bluesky_Liz

  7 Feb 07, 12:34

  Originally posted by The man who was death:

  use...........for spacing

  What he said, then change the font color to white.
• MoonIce

  7 Feb 07, 12:37

  Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:

  What he said, then change the font color to white.

  pity no hidden mode
• Ito_^

  7 Feb 07, 12:39

  u can always type ur stuff in paint or any image editing program den save as image lor.
  
  like this..
  
  
  
  
• DeadPoet

  9 Feb 07, 17:15

  Originally posted by Devil1976:

  Seems like SPACE doesn't really work in SGFORUMS.. Sometimes find it HARD to truly express my poems especially of its layout...
  
  Any help with that?

  Everything okay now brother?
• DeadPoet

  9 Feb 07, 17:17

  What does that mean?
• Devil1976

  9 Feb 07, 17:42

  Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:

  What he said, then change the font color to white.

  Kinda cool!
• DeadPoet

  9 Feb 07, 17:43

  Originally posted by Devil1976:

  Kinda cool!

  Now then you know ah? You need to post more my friend.
• Devil1976

  9 Feb 07, 17:44

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Everything okay now brother?

  I like the combination of their ideas! Shall try if I come across them again next time?
  
  ~Devil sits and wait for inspirations.....~
  
  

  Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:

  What he said, then change the font color to white.

• DeadPoet

  9 Feb 07, 17:50

  Why not?
• Ito_^

  9 Feb 07, 17:50

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  What does that mean?

  Colour of the flower
  Has already faded away,
  While in idle thoughts
  
  My life passes vainly by,
  As I watch the long rains fall.
  
  not i translate or write one, i juz copy n paste for my blog layout only.
• DeadPoet

  9 Feb 07, 18:05

  Originally posted by Ito_^:

  Colour of the flower
  Has already faded away,
  While in idle thoughts
  
  My life passes vainly by,
  As I watch the long rains fall.
  
  not i translate or write one, i juz copy n paste for my blog layout only.

  Looks like a tanka to me. Hmm I wonder who wrote it.
• Ito_^

  9 Feb 07, 18:12

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Looks like a tanka to me. Hmm I wonder who wrote it.

  ya it is.. pai seh. neber giv credit. ono no komachi wrote it.
• DeadPoet

  9 Feb 07, 18:14

  Originally posted by Ito_^:

  ya it is.. pai seh. neber giv credit. ono no komachi wrote it.

  Thanks! I go search for more of her poems.
• DeadPoet

  9 Feb 07, 18:22

  
  Ono no Komachi Viewing Cherry Blossoms
  Taken from www.mfa.org
• Ito_^

  9 Feb 07, 18:29

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  
  Ono no Komachi Viewing Cherry Blossoms
  Taken from www.mfa.org

  too bad, she died a old lonely death, despite being chio bu.