And it rained on an autumn night Cold winds blowing across the barren farmland Animals kept in their pens MothersÂ’ tales entertaining the young children
Came knocking on a door A peculiar young man did Clad in an old yellow raincoat With a smile on his face
Good day to you young lass, he said Would you mind me borrowing your fireplace? The winds have chilled my bones And I got no place I can call home
Bluesky_Liz
Hm... and what happens next? It seems to beg a longer tale. Does she let the stranger in? Is he handsome? Does he behave?
Clan in an old yellow raincoat
I think you mean "clad".
DarkClouds
Opps. yepp edited it already. thanks!
Well, what you said made sense but i prefer it open ended. Leave it up to the reader to decide and imagine for himself/herself!
But again, i might continue the tale when i have some new inspiration! [/quote]