Monday blues

• RaTtY8l

  1 Sep 06, 16:50

  Oh I jus wake up
  My mind is in a blank
  My eyes try to focus
  My hairs is in a mess
  
  I went to the toilet
  To relieve myself
  I gargle my mouth
  To get rid of the bad smell
  
  I brush my teeth
  For hygienic purpose
  I than wash my face
  And proceed on my breakfast
  
  I take a shower after eating
  To make myself clean
  After that I change my clothes
  And rush to my office
  
  Oh today is Monday blue
  I had to carry my heavy bag
  But I have no choice
  Or else I will get the sack
  
  dedicated for those having monday blues
• Bluesky_Liz

  1 Sep 06, 17:42

  I can relate to the dread of Mondays. You know, I think to make this poem more fun, you should try to show more dread and dragginess rather than routein in the descriptions of what you do to prepare to go to work.
• LinYu

  1 Sep 06, 17:46

  Thank God it's Friday
  I can put all my blues away
  Put all my work on hold
  I'm going to party all day.
  
  
  for the tgif ppl
  
  
• DeadPoet

  1 Sep 06, 18:11

  Originally posted by RaTtY8l:

  Oh I jus wake up
  My mind is in a blank
  My eyes try to focus
  My hairs is in a mess
  
  I went to the toilet
  To relieve myself
  I gargle my mouth
  To get rid of the bad smell
  
  I brush my teeth
  For hygienic purpose
  I than wash my face
  And proceed on my breakfast
  
  I take a shower after eating
  To make myself clean
  After that I change my clothes
  And rush to my office
  
  Oh today is Monday blue
  I had to carry my heavy bag
  But I have no choice
  Or else I will get the sack
  
  dedicated for those having monday blues

  I every day also blue then how?