Wish

• LazerLordz

  24 Jun 06, 02:15

  And there you are
  softly in my orbit
  and I could smell
  the fresh scent of
  warm showered hair.
  
  Yours.
  
  I fall to you
  and you catch me
  like a Yankee
  ought to.
  
  But will the inning
  last?
  Or are we just
  in a dance
  till the lights
  appear
  in our hearts?
• DeadPoet

  26 Jun 06, 18:02

  Originally posted by LazerLordz:

  And there you are
  softly in my orbit
  and I could smell
  the fresh scent of
  warm showered hair.
  
  Yours.
  
  I fall to you
  and you catch me
  like a Yankee
  ought to.
  
  But will the inning
  last?
  Or are we just
  in a dance
  till the lights
  appear
  in our hearts?

  Love the first stanza. I could smell it too.
• LazerLordz

  1 Jul 06, 10:51

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Love the first stanza. I could smell it too.

  
• dsnake1

  4 Jul 06, 00:15

  Hey Lazer, i like this piece. playful kind of feel about it.
  
  The Yankee in the poem is the baseball team?
• DeadPoet

  6 Jul 06, 20:05

  Originally posted by dsnake1:

  Hey Lazer, i like this piece. playful kind of feel about it.
  
  The Yankee in the poem is the baseball team?

  I don't think so.
• LazerLordz

  24 Jul 06, 15:29

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  I don't think so.

  Actually it is.