Gullible

• HENG@

  20 Jun 06, 10:21

  Sweet honey-ed sugar-coated words,
  They sway me so effortlessly, my achilles heel.
  I don't even know it, and suddenly I am,
  Plunging,
  Plunging.
  
  Deep into this dark lonely well,
  This hole in the ground of trust misplaced.
  Surprise, shock, a double blow,
  A precious gift I give so easy,
  My nature so fatally susceptible
  .
  Perhaps when all is said and done,
  I'm just a deluded fool in a padded cell
• Bluesky_Liz

  20 Jun 06, 20:21

  As it is, some people are very good at deception.
  
  "honey" doesn't need the '-ed', it's also easier to read without it.
  
• expiringpoet

  20 Jun 06, 23:59

  Since most of us are fools and mad when it comes to love, you'll have many friends in your padded cell
• HENG@

  22 Jun 06, 01:02

  my padded cell is empty except for me. I accidently slew everyone else in here with me when i went mad.
• missqi

  24 Jun 06, 21:06

  Originally posted by HENG@:

  my padded cell is empty except for me. I accidently slew everyone else in here with me when i went mad.

  Its empty because you think it is.
  
• alexkusu

  24 Jun 06, 21:10

  hmm..after a long and hard deliberation, I give it a 3
• DeadPoet

  26 Jun 06, 17:59

  Stay there for a while until you are ready to come out.
• Devil1976

  26 Jun 06, 18:04

  Hmm...
• DeadPoet

  17 Aug 06, 19:29

  Originally posted by Devil1976:

  Hmm...