Neither here, nor there.
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erm , i wrote this while i was erm . Drunk, so anyone who can try to make ANY sense of this vomit please do post , i am still trying to find out myself.
Taste. Flavour, my dreams have texture
Food. Banter, the train ride home.
Have you asked for your place under?
In the four by four
Inked in his own cell
The splintered creaks together with the tattered flooring
A quarter to give. none to savour the return trip.
Lies in the dreamlike trance beside the tranquil lake
How many secrets does she keep?
Untie my bonds to misty perfections
Looseness , undercover. -
Um, forgive me if I am mistaken but the last time I check, if youÂ’re writing poetry you need to be conscious.
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heh , hence the topic thread : neither here nor there , i am not too sure about the conscious bit though - does drunk = really really stoned? or just tipsy and numb all over? >.<
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Wow we have a Li Bai in DPS (S)!Originally posted by Mirumoto:heh , hence the topic thread : neither here nor there , i am not too sure about the conscious bit though - does drunk = really really stoned? or just tipsy and numb all over? >.<
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This piece means as much as a drunk man talking.