to grow a rose?
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to grow a rose
but to know not how
perhaps one should
smother the young seed
with all the warmth one has
and let loose a deluge
of uncompromising hope -
Interesting.
However, I have no hope with plants of any kind.
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Nice.Originally posted by ironoxideman:to grow a rose
but to know not how
perhaps one should
smother the young seed
with all the warmth one has
and let loose a deluge
of uncompromising hope
This could be a poem on love, on how to bring a child up.
Or falling in love for the first time.
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its supposed to sound cynical...Originally posted by dsnake1:Nice.
This could be a poem on love, on how to bring a child up.
Or falling in love for the first time.
and its actually about how pple are so clumsy in love that they ruin it by 'smothering' it with their passion and causing 'the soil to become waterlogged by over-watering it with hope.'
guess the verses dont show the above mentioned points...
well now its a harmless,simple,sincere sounding piece of poetry about love.
no harm done.
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yes, a sincere piece of poetry about love, though you wanted it to sound cynical.Originally posted by ironoxideman:its supposed to sound cynical...
and its actually about how pple are so clumsy in love that they ruin it by 'smothering' it with their passion and causing 'the soil to become waterlogged by over-watering it with hope.'
guess the verses dont show the above mentioned points...
well now its a harmless,simple,sincere sounding piece of poetry about love.
no harm done.
a good effort though.