Stupid stuff -- poetry
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Stupid stuff --- poetry ---
thereÂ’s no reason to read
them, no reason for rhyming
phrases or jagged stanzas, blocks
of metaphors
creating sentimentalistÂ’s crap.
Idle scribbles from an idle hand – why
should groups of men hunker together
arguing over
an arrangement of words?
They all say the same
thing no matter how you
put it,
donÂ’t they?
IÂ’ll use my camera phone if I wanted
to capture a moment
in a moment. Forget
words – they have too much
meaning,
too many meanings.
Stupid stuff --- poetry.
Who reads that stuff anyway?
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liz, are you having a fever?
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Head cold on a day too hot.
But actually, it was an attempt at irony.
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*cough cough*
well if no one read, then there won't be DPS liao lor.... -
I suspect that's what some people think especially when discussing about poetry and what is good or bad.
This is almost 'evil', now that I read it.
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Criticism is good.
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I agree really.
But I suspect for me, it's become easier to recieve than to give lately. -
Most poets are mad. I am one, that's for sure.
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X2.Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:I agree really.
But I suspect for me, it's become easier to recieve than to give lately.
Let me try,
If you intend to write this simply for fun, you have achieved your goal. This is a very interesting poem, but it lacks depth, which I suspect is not your intention anyway.
Not your best work but it will do.
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Thank you for your comments, DP. Yep, I was just having silly fun.
And it's good to see you back on this board.
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it's good to have silly fun!!Originally posted by Bluesky_Liz:Thank you for your comments, DP. Yep, I was just having silly fun.
And it's good to see you back on this board. -
Well, you are 'dead' after all.Originally posted by DeadPoet:Most poets are mad. I am one, that's for sure.