My chinese poem
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Hello!
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Happy New Year! -
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thank you, timble.
Happy New Year to you too! -
paiseh haven't come in to see for a long time....
the piece is classical in style... but perhaps a bit too classic? frankly few write in this manner in tis century.... and the piece is a bit too short to fully tell a story... perhaps a rework?
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this is called "qi yan jue shi", means the type with four sentence, seven charaters each.
timble, who are you waiting for?
as tare said, ppl seldom write in this way already, they tend to express themselves in more details, dont follow the "wu yan" "qi yan" type anymore. -
Hi hi!Thank you for your comments...!
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Honestly... I've been writing in that kind of wu yan qi yan style cos I'm amazed how poets of that time could use short sentences to summarise their feelings in a poetic way.
Anyway, shall attempt more modern styles...))
Mo Chou: I'm waiting for things to turn for the better. -
nice.... effectively conveyed the meaning and feeling with just a good choice of a few words... i like
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Sorry I very blur one, where to find "Encoding"?Originally posted by timble:Hello!
You may view the messages _> right click "Encoding" choose Chinese Simplified.
Happy New Year!
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DP, sure or not? timble's instructions so clear even a dummy like me can get it!Originally posted by DeadPoet:Sorry I very blur one, where to find "Encoding"? 