Grey Morning Good Morning :)
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Sometimes u wake up with a line in ur head and then it gets stuck like a broken record. Bah.
hey
its a grey morning
and some might say
that it makes them feel
that they wanna stay
in bed all day
but as I lay
and i thought of what may
have been,
between me
and him
was it what it seemed
struggling with a memory
i thought time had dimmed
but the night had brought
uninvited into my dream
so I woke
it felt grey
and i was afraid
wondering if i had lost my way -
not bad.. short and simple but abit too simple actually
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I like these few lines. They look promising, try to rewrite your poem from here.Originally posted by ShrodingersCat:but the night had brought
uninvited into my dream
so I woke
it felt grey
and i was afraid
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heehee thanks. woke up with a couple of lines in my head
and scribbled them off hastily before work so very simple ba..
was trying to play w rhythm metre
HEy a long time ago when I was still forced to study literature
came across this poem ABOUT meters
Every line of the poem is written in a different meter
and it shows how the meter affects the mood
does anyone have it??
I tried to find it but I can't.