June Poetry Exercise

• DeadPoet

  24 Jun 05, 11:44

  Originally posted by panicTheory:

  Im conveying exactly what the title implies. Simplicity on primal flow. I have feminized the assault on my spirit, and "she" is none other than my thesis paper that I have to do.
  
  The first verse entails the apprehension and subsequent daunting task of starting the essay as its way overdue.
  
  To combat such stress I have resolved to heading to the bar with some friends. And I saw "her" in the hands of people walking by, on the posters of the streets, in the toilet signs. She was everywhere.
  
  The third verse is about her wholeness and composition. Im drawing on ancient imagery to further describe the difficulty of the challenge as well as her cruel disregard for my feelings. That paper tyrant!
  
  4th verse. In a fit of resilience and diligence, I started to delve into her inner workings to solve the question put before me. "I entered her between lines. her body paper soft transcribed" Which I may sadly report, not to much success. Its been 8000 words since last night and about 2000 words to go. Woop de doo!
  
  Desperation, thou art in words

  Oh... now it is beginning to make sense. Heh.
  
  Good luck on your thesis paper!
  
• DeadPoet

  24 Jun 05, 11:50

  Originally posted by KittynMeow:

  the current arrangement is deliberate.... because I was trying to bring across the impression that a relationship built up over long periods of time can easily break down in an instant....days, weeks, months of happiness can be forgotten in a matter of hours when doubt sets in....

  I was wondering why the current arrangement? Surly there must a reason for doing so. Now I know.
  
  Well done Kitty!
  
  
• panicTheory

  24 Jun 05, 21:36

  Originally posted by KittynMeow:

  Wah liow... after reading this... I'm starting to PANIC!!! I haven't really started writing my dissertation yet and I'm supposed to finish the whole project (including research, surveys, interviews) by September!!! SH|T!!

  I hate research methods. I really really hate those. For mass surveys I think its best to aim ppl in their early 30s. Serious about life and not old enough to be long winded.
  
  good luck!
• panicTheory

  24 Jun 05, 21:37

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Oh... now it is beginning to make sense. Heh.
  
  Good luck on your thesis paper!
  

  thanks.
  
  Any ramblings on your part?
• DeadPoet

  25 Jun 05, 22:18

  Originally posted by panicTheory:

  thanks.
  
  Any ramblings on your part?

  Er... I don't understand.
• tare

  27 Jun 05, 16:02