I Want To Complain
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this is a blue tat most women suffers... and it's not once in a blue moon!Originally posted by choco B:i've got the blues
i need new shoes
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It sounds like a ditty..something like an advert.Keep on writingOriginally posted by FireIce:Weather not friendly
Early morning rain
Ignited my rheumatism
Now my knee pain
Breakfast was coffee and biscuits
What could be more plain
Then I cut my finger
What a bane
So much to do at work
I'm going insane
Thanks for reading this poem
Which is so very lame
thank u thank u
tot of it when i walking to work
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i was so bored
so i have a thought
find someone to talk c.ock
i think better not
so i came to the forum
to see if anyone plays carrom
instead i found some poems
so i took the challenge
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morning caught in the rain
got nowhere to complain
today the boss not too happy
made us work until all giddy
back home nothing's on the TV
think i go forum and look see
Oh, someone already complained
the poem really ease my pain. -
Thanks for starting this thread FI.Originally posted by FireIce:Weather not friendly
Early morning rain
Ignited my rheumatism
Now my knee pain
Breakfast was coffee and biscuits
What could be more plain
Then I cut my finger
What a bane
So much to do at work
I'm going insane
Thanks for reading this poem
Which is so very lame
thank u thank u
tot of it when i walking to work
At first I was wondering what happened, how come FI wants to complain in DPS (S)? -
reminds me of that xking and pipi thread
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oh bbb
please be a dearee
don't let our heart sink
provide us with the link
to that thread you speak
so we can have a peek
of the silly ditties written
of the follies of the smitten
Originally posted by browniebaobao:reminds me of that xking and pipi thread -
Originally posted by DeadPoet:Thanks for starting this thread FI.
At first I was wondering what happened, how come FI wants to complain in DPS (S)?
cool thread!
knee pain?! old liao la...(me older but shhhhhhhh) -
F.O.S has my votes as the darkhorse of this poetic battleOriginally posted by F.O.S:Its not lame and its not shame
Writting this poem is just a game
I will be back to try again
now I have to leave this game
tomorrow will come back to fight again.
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as usual i woke up early
again because of my neighbour's folly
sick of all these knockings
and it was not even from boinking
feel like telling him off
or at least ask him to fark off
today is friday the thirteenth
guess it is ok to commit sin -
http://www.sgforums.com/?action=thread_display&thread_id=108142Originally posted by the Bear:oh bbb
please be a dearee
don't let our heart sink
provide us with the link
to that thread you speak
so we can have a peek
of the silly ditties written
of the follies of the smitten -
thank you dear bbb
you can clearly see
if one takes the time
to write in rhyme
people remember
probably forever
and if we persist
people just can't resist
to add a little more
until it becomes lore
so come to DP's society
to add a little poetryOriginally posted by browniebaobao: -
i am full of sweat
my body is so wet
jus finish a game of soccer
in the woodlands area
as my mum didnt cook tonite
so i gonna eat outside
i go tabao a pack of mee goreng
n tat cost 2 dollars n 50 cents
after i settled my dinner
i walk bad with my legs full of blisters
lucky i have done enuff stretching
or else walking home would b torturing
i finish my dinner at home
with nothing else to do so i conjure up this poem paiseh ah my 1st poem in dps so crude 
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hey... a first time writer
as with most..
he was a poet..
and he didn't even know it.. -
Why are you all in here
composing poems for all to hear
When you could be outside having fun
out in the open, in the sun
I know its night and theres no sun
still thats no reason not to have fun
Tts sad to be homebound on saturday night
logging in sgforums, joining a word fight
Just realise something new
I am here right now with all of you
Wasting minutes making this rhyme
when I could have better used my time
So here I am laming away
time flies, we reached the end of day
I have sat too long, i need to visit the toilet
I said my piece, am I a poet? -
it's raining really heavily
and there's no football on tv
so i hang around lazily
staring at my PC
i may eat some ben & jerry's
or do some chores
thought of going to harry's
but i'm glad i stayed indoors
the lightning just struck
the thunder went boom
outside it must really suck
i'm thankful i'm in my room
besides, i've got an early shift
and not just me being lazy
so, you get my drift?
tomorrow i gotta get up real early -
At least Bear, you have a job
I'm so poor, I have to rob
The thought having to wake up early
however does make one feel dreary
Tomorrow i have to awake early as well
To jog with friends so that i can feel well
Although i would rather I sleep thru'
the sunday morning all the day to afternoon'
Rain, thunderstorms you say?
I looked out, its clear as day!
Over here its as dry as desert
Makes me feel like having ice-cream as dessert.
Maybe a scoop of Haagen Daz?
Or Ben & Jerry's in a glass?
Or something special, depending in mood?
Actually i am dreaming, my fridge has no food! 
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caught in the rain,
late at night,
dashing to shelter with all my might...
back to my home,
wash and comb,
wishing i had supper at olio dome...
log onto the net,
where poets met,
in a thread full of crap....
DP: next DPS competition, theme should be "complain"! sure got lotsa entries! -
We shall see about that.Originally posted by tare:caught in the rain,
late at night,
dashing to shelter with all my might...
back to my home,
wash and comb,
wishing i had supper at olio dome...
log onto the net,
where poets met,
in a thread full of crap....
DP: next DPS competition, theme should be "complain"! sure got lotsa entries! -
complain i must
coz i damned frust
write until so much
all we get is such
but then it's from DP
as everyone can see
he owns this place
so must give him face
all sit, wait and see
what the next topic will be
then start to think
hoping it won't stink
thanks DP for these contests
i really must confess
i've enjoyed reading them all
and can't wait for the next call
(man... i can write crap so bloody quickly )Originally posted by DeadPoet:We shall see about that. -
CorrectionOriginally posted by the Bear:but then it's from DP
as everyone can see
he owns this place
so must give him face
I started this place, but WE own it. -
the sun is shining,
early in the morning,
dressed up, make up,
i decided to perk up...
walking in the morn cool,
just next to a school,
wolf whistles i heard,
ignoring it, i din even turn....
whistles came not once but thrice,
then a loud yell "hey big t***!"
no need for other's comment on my anatomy
i quietly scream "shut up u small d***!"
hmm.... not very good as a poem, but i sure need to release it!!!
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Which school is that?Originally posted by tare:the sun is shining,
early in the morning,
dressed up, make up,
i decided to perk up...
walking in the morn cool,
just next to a school,
wolf whistles i heard,
ignoring it, i din even turn....
whistles came not once but thrice,
then a loud yell "hey big t***!"
no need for other's comment on my anatomy
i quietly scream "shut up u small d***!"
hmm.... not very good as a poem, but i sure need to release it!!! -
Just an update -
Ha ha
Mission accomplishedOriginally posted by choco B:till i net
the perfect stilette
strappy gold sandals
adorned with jewels
they're so lovely
they make me happy -
err.. can say it here meh?Originally posted by DeadPoet:Which school is that? 
those who noe where i stay will noe....
anw i wrote an email to their principal when i got into the office.... saying HOW very disappointed i was...