I Want To Complain
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Weather not friendly
Early morning rain
Ignited my rheumatism
Now my knee pain
Breakfast was coffee and biscuits
What could be more plain
Then I cut my finger
What a bane
So much to do at work
I'm going insane
Thanks for reading this poem
Which is so very lame
thank u thank u
tot of it when i walking to work -
will i get banned if i crapped here?
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rheumatism at 36?
jia lat when you reached your 50s. -
i want to complain too
so that's what i do
my sandal's got a hole
right on the sole
it soaks up like a sponge
making one sandal grunge
i'd throw it right now
but i've not found
another pair
i'm in despair
a wet foot again
oh what a pain
i've done with my bellyaching
now back to forum reading
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nice one FI! all poems are welcome here; be it complain or not... if u can scold ppl in a poetic way also can! me and bear did it b4
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so far the mods here r not known to ban ppl.... if u can crap in poems, FIRE away!Originally posted by Mospeada:
will i get banned if i crapped here? -
btw, my first poem here........hahahahaha
quite obvious why D7 for English Lit........ -
someone in a mood......to complains....
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Fireice not friendly
Early mornign KPKB
Ignited my Migraine
Now my head pain
Breakfast is coffee and cigarette
What could be more plain
now I bite my tongue
What a bane
no job for me to do
I'm going insane
Thanks for reading this poem
Which is so very lame
copy from FireIce -
pay me royaltyOriginally posted by F.O.S:Fireice not friendly
Early mornign KPKB
Ignited my Migraine
Now my head pain
Breakfast is coffee and cigarette
What could be more plain
now I bite my tongue
What a bane
no job for me to do
I'm going insane
Thanks for reading this poem
Which is so very lame
copy from FireIce -
wow! 1st poem! hehehee.. hope to see more of itOriginally posted by FireIce:btw, my first poem here........hahahahaha
quite obvious why D7 for English Lit........
language to me is for communication, as long as we can understand, doesn't really matter if it's english or singlish ... my angmoh also no good -
Why must I Pay?Originally posted by FireIce:pay me royalty
are you from Pay And Pay?
Income tax I Pay
CPF I Pay
only my boss don't pay
Want me to pay royalty
you have to engage a lawyer
wait till I get a buyer
I will pay you royalty and lawyer. -
u can rap thisOriginally posted by F.O.S:Why must I Pay?
are you from Pay And Pay?
Income tax I Pay
CPF I Pay
only my boss don't pay
Want me to pay royalty
you have to engage a lawyer
wait till I get a buyer
I will pay you royalty and lawyer.
shd sound cool -
Originally posted by FireIce:u can rap this
shd sound cool 
my england F9 -
haha funny funnee lol!!
made my day
otherwise miserable & cold!!
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You want to complainOriginally posted by the Bear:i want to complain too
so that's what i do
my sandal's got a hole
right on the sole
it soaks up like a sponge
making one sandal grunge
i'd throw it right now
but i've not found
another pair
i'm in despair
a wet foot again
oh what a pain
i've done with my bellyaching
now back to forum reading
please don't put the blame
your scandal is not fit
cos your foot is too big
please get a new nice and fit
it only cost you a bit
when you get a Hong Kong feet
tomorrow outing please stay a feet
joking huh, if you don't like I say sorry lor -
WOW! Its rare to find poem with a hallmark of qualityOriginally posted by FireIce:Weather not friendly
Early morning rain
Ignited my rheumatism
Now my knee pain
Breakfast was coffee and biscuits
What could be more plain
Then I cut my finger
What a bane
So much to do at work
I'm going insane
Thanks for reading this poem
Which is so very lame
thank u thank u
tot of it when i walking to work -
wake up early,
nua in bed,
see my alarm ticking away,
wash and brush,
with eyes closed,
can't afford to scare myself cold...
feed my doggie,
feed myself,
kopi and loti spread with kaya,
on the teebee,
hear the news,
nothing interesting to catch my muse...
nua on sofa,
feeling shiok,
the teebee still on with dunnoe wat,
hear my doggie,
run and play,
suddenly jump up, i m LATE!!!! -
oh, what a shame!!Originally posted by F.O.S:You want to complain
please don't put the blame
your scandal is not fit
cos your foot is too big
please get a new nice and fit
it only cost you a bit
when you get a Hong Kong fit
tomorrow outing please stay a feet
joking huh, if you don't like I say sorry lor
your poem is just too lame.
dont say his feet is too big
its just that he is too cheap
go find someone you can cheat
a free shoe is all you need -
Its not lame and its not shameOriginally posted by dragg:oh, what a shame!!
your poem is just too lame.
dont say his feet is too big
its just that he is too cheap
go find someone you can cheat
a free shoe is all you need
Writting this poem is just a game
I will be back to try again
now I have to leave this game
tomorrow will come back to fight again. -
actually the sandal's too big
can't even dance a jig
but they were comfy
now they're soggy
wish Reef made them again
save me from the pain
gotta look for another
oh.. footwear's such a BOTHER! -
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keep the fire burning,
keep the poems coming,
whether it's lame or game,
it is entertaining to many!
if tis keeps on, DPS might go up the chart! -
i've got the blues
i need new shoes
please hold your abuse
i have an excuse
black pumps are boring
so uninspiring
silver clashes
with red dresses
red's a wedgie
looks too cutsey
beige is grand
but too bland
white's a drag
i'll look like a flag
so you see
the gravity
of hitting the shops
with no stops
till i net
the perfect stilette
strappy gold sandals
adorned with jewels
they're so lovely
they make me happy