Must read poems for the ladies out there

• The man who was death

  6 May 05, 20:22

  Take care of yourself! A gentle poem to remind ladies out there to look after themselves
  
  Tragedy is her
  
  Take heed, my fair lady
  For the moon paints you vulnerable and pale
  Take cover, my fair lady
  For the sun burns your pretty skin
  
  Wolves lives not in wild but in darkness
  Foxes are cunning and leaves you in sadness
  Beasts lusts for your beauty
  Do not let their paws stain your chastity
  
  Lead astray the gazers
  The further up your seducing skin
  In the bed of roses
  Every rose has its thorn
  Like every night has its dawn
  
  A sin for him, a tragedy fot you
  Come pleasure haunted by fear
  Come closure haunted by tear
  Beware of desires within
  Falling in love with their deep dark sin
• tare

  7 May 05, 14:33

  Originally posted by The man who was death:

  Every rose has its thorn
  Like every night has its thorn
  
  ....
  
  Come pleasure haunted by fear
  Come closure haunted by tear
  

  tis two statements mean wat har? sorry my angmoh no good... can explain?
  
  btw i like the 2nd stanza.....
• alexkusu

  7 May 05, 15:12

  6/10
• The man who was death

  7 May 05, 18:04

  Originally posted by tare:

  tis two statements mean wat har? sorry my angmoh no good... can explain?
  
  btw i like the 2nd stanza.....

  Sorry, it was supposed to be "like every night has its dawn" it means every thing will have another side, it won't be rosy or all good all the time.
  
  The second and third line from the last stanza is actually about rape and how it makes it feel for the rapist and the victim
• SBS9828X

  7 May 05, 18:06

  Originally posted by The man who was death:

  Sorry, it was supposed to be "like every night has its dawn" it means every thing will have another side, it won't be rosy or all good all the time.
  
  The second and third line from the last stanza is actually about rape and how it makes it feel for the rapist and the victim

  hey death ur suppose to be in the war y are u here..uve left me no choice but to teleport u back to the jedi accademy where we will be discussing something
• DeadPoet

  7 May 05, 23:57

  "A sin for him, a tragedy fot you"
  
  Typo error.
  
• tare

  9 May 05, 12:07

  Originally posted by The man who was death:

  Sorry, it was supposed to be "like every night has its dawn" it means every thing will have another side, it won't be rosy or all good all the time.
  
  The second and third line from the last stanza is actually about rape and how it makes it feel for the rapist and the victim

  ooh okie now tat make sense
  
  come closure?? hmmm...... why the word "come"? abit hard to grasp the idea....