first attempt: annoymous

• droopyeyes

  1 Feb 05, 02:03

  if tears can speak my thoughts,
  i am never a quiet person by nature.
  
  times and times i see you there,
  but have you ever look up and acknowledge my presence?
  
  i yearn for the care you've showered for others,
  no doubt you will not do the same for me.
  
  forever i will not wait,
  eternity is what i'll do.
  
  Happy Birthday to DPS! First poem contributed to DPS as a present
• DeadPoet

  1 Feb 05, 02:08

  Originally posted by droopyeyes:

  if tears can speak my thoughts,
  i am never a quiet person by nature.
  
  times and times i see you there,
  but have you ever look up and acknowledge my presence?
  
  i yearn for the care you've showered for others,
  no doubt you will not do the same for me.
  
  forever i will not wait,
  eternity is what i'll do.
  
  Happy Birthday to DPS! First poem contributed to DPS as a present

  Thanks droopyeyes. I am so honoured to have you posting your first poem in DPS(S).
  
  But... I am really greedy, I hope to receive more 'presents' from you.
  
  Hope to see more of poems here. Hee hee. Greedy right?
• droopyeyes

  1 Feb 05, 10:07

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Thanks droopyeyes. I am so honoured to have you posting your first poem in DPS(S).
  
  But... I am really greedy, I hope to receive more 'presents' from you.
  
  Hope to see more of poems here. Hee hee. Greedy right?

  my england very lousy one.