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My Condolences......
pipi & poot-poot
4 Jan 05, 22:31
He's rough and lacks in etiquette,
Society would say.
He has no classy attributes,
To help him on his way.
He's not a fancy dresser,
And he's not so charming and neat.
With simple clothes and simple shoes,
He wears upon his feet.
He didn't join a club,
Nor does he drive a shiny car.
And when he takes vacations,
He doesn't go very far.
He doesn't dine on fine cuisine,
To him fast food's a treat.
And he may use a plastic spoon,
When it is time to eat.
He has a modest little flat,
But has all that he needs.
He keeps his hair trimmed neat and short,
And cater for what his children seeks.
He works long hours at his job,
To make an average pay.
And even if he's sick or tired,
He goes to work each day.
His job involves just low-skilled labour,
His pay just makes ends meet.
But, a few good friends and family,
Make his life complete.
He's not well versed in poetry,
Theater or the arts.
And wisdom is not something,
That he constantly imparts.
He loves the simple things in life,
For riches doesn't thirst.
He knows in life what is important,
And his family is put first.
The wealth that God has given him,
To treasure in his life.
A loving son and 2 daughters,
And a very special wife.
He never has much money,
And his life is not a show.
But he is still the richest man,
That I will ever know.
To others he's a simple man,
And fame he's never had.
But he's the greatest man I know,
He also is my Dad.
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Penned By: Poppy (amended)
Dedicated To: My friend in grieve..over the sudden loss of her dad...
Message: My Condolences
tare
4 Jan 05, 22:42
tis is really really touching........
pipi & poot-poot
5 Jan 05, 07:05
I may be gone now, but I'm still very near.
Death can never separate us...the things i hold so dear...
Each time you feel a gentle breeze,
It's my hand caressing your face...
And everywhere the wind may blow,
It carries my voice whispering your name...
When the wind blows your hair ever so slightly,
Its me pushing, a few stray hairs back in place...
When you feel raindrops fall on your face,
It's just me placing soft kisses...worried sick you'll lose your way...
At night do look up in the sky,
And see the stars shining so brightly...
I might be one of those stars and I'm winking at you,
Cause the sight of you smiling delights me...
For never forget you're the apple of my eye.
And I am forever your loving Dad...
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Penned By: Mary M. Green (amended)
Danisdead101times
5 Jan 05, 08:28
two very good piece of poetry~
DeadPoet
7 Jan 05, 17:08
Originally posted by Danisdead101times:
two very good piece of poetry~
x2.
Two very touching write.
LilO gIrL
7 Jan 05, 19:39
pipi & poot-poot
7 Jan 05, 20:40
Something 2 lighten up d sombre mood ?