Night Dweller
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Night Dweller
Consciousness came in an instant. The shadows of the night chasing away the remnants of the day, a black raven swooping in on a white dove. Eyes fearful of the sun's searing, fiery rays, sweep across the room, cold and dark. Pale hands reach for the telephone sitting amongst the gloom. Fingers dance across the number keys, and a familiar voice answered.
"Yeah?"
"Hey K. Same tonight?"
"Yes. Be at your place first."
With that, the conversation ends. The standard attire is worn. Staring into darkness, waiting for K's arrival. Eternity passes, K arrives. It's time to move out.
Drawing the bloodred coat around tightly, as the cold icy wind lanced deep into the flesh, chilling the very soul. Nothing is said. 2 figures move fast down the streets. Minutes later, 2 figures step on board the underground, whizzing towards their hunting grounds.
A unholy fuision of Nu-trance electro mix is heard faintly. The 2 figures look at each other. They are here. Violet flashing lights with hues of pink, red, blue, flash out of the doorway. The unholy cybermusic gets louder. The 2 of them step in through the doorway, unfeeling eyes not betraying the excitment of the hunt. Making their way to the bar, eyeing potentials, not a word spoken, thoughts shared. Alcohol is ordered. It burns its way down their throats, an appetiser for the night. Soon, something else wet and warm would follow the paths burned by the fiery liquids.
They loooked at each other. One female yet male, one male yet female. Perfectly complimenting each other for the hunt. Drinks finished, still without a word unsaid, they move to the dancefloor. -
Wah so complicated arh.Originally posted by HENG@:One female yet male, one male yet female. Perfectly complimenting each other for the hunt. Drinks finished, still without a word unsaid, they move to the dancefloor.
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yup.Originally posted by DeadPoet:Wah so complicated arh. -
And I am not at all surprise.Originally posted by HENG@:yup.
By the way have you visited the new forum?
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shhhh.....Originally posted by DeadPoet:And I am not at all surprise.
By the way have you visited the new forum? 
new forum? nope. where's it? -
Alamk I got pm you leh.Originally posted by HENG@:shhhh.....
new forum? nope. where's it?
If you have not received it let me know and I will pm you again. -
oh ya i got it. okies i'll go see.Originally posted by DeadPoet:Alamk I got pm you leh.
If you have not received it let me know and I will pm you again. -
A touch, soft and tender, A whisper, full of desire, A gasp of sweet surrender, As passion fuels the fire.Originally posted by HENG@:Night Dweller
Consciousness came in an instant. The shadows of the night chasing away the remnants of the day, a black raven swooping in on a white dove. Eyes fearful of the sun's searing, fiery rays, sweep across the room, cold and dark. Pale hands reach for the telephone sitting amongst the gloom. Fingers dance across the number keys, and a familiar voice answered.
"Yeah?"
"Hey K. Same tonight?"
"Yes. Be at your place first."
With that, the conversation ends. The standard attire is worn. Staring into darkness, waiting for K's arrival. Eternity passes, K arrives. It's time to move out.
Drawing the bloodred coat around tightly, as the cold icy wind lanced deep into the flesh, chilling the very soul. Nothing is said. 2 figures move fast down the streets. Minutes later, 2 figures step on board the underground, whizzing towards their hunting grounds.
A unholy fuision of Nu-trance electro mix is heard faintly. The 2 figures look at each other. They are here. Violet flashing lights with hues of pink, red, blue, flash out of the doorway. The unholy cybermusic gets louder. The 2 of them step in through the doorway, unfeeling eyes not betraying the excitment of the hunt. Making their way to the bar, eyeing potentials, not a word spoken, thoughts shared. Alcohol is ordered. It burns its way down their throats, an appetiser for the night. Soon, something else wet and warm would follow the paths burned by the fiery liquids.
They loooked at each other. One female yet male, one male yet female. Perfectly complimenting each other for the hunt. Drinks finished, still without a word unsaid, they move to the dancefloor.
No words spoken between them, No promises to be kept, No lies being told tonight, No looking back- No regrets.
Longing to hold each other, Such precious little time, Both vowed to another, Being lonely their only crime.
Tomorrow bringing sorrow, A brief moment of shame. With the memory of this one night, A release from Passion's Flames. -
very nice poem! gosh I love it...Originally posted by subzero_baby:A touch, soft and tender, A whisper, full of desire, A gasp of sweet surrender, As passion fuels the fire.
No words spoken between them, No promises to be kept, No lies being told tonight, No looking back- No regrets.
Longing to hold each other, Such precious little time, Both vowed to another, Being lonely their only crime.
Tomorrow bringing sorrow, A brief moment of shame. With the memory of this one night, A release from Passion's Flames. -
thought it was a "continue" from your poem...
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my poem? which poem?Originally posted by subzero_baby:thought it was a "continue" from your poem... -
the one i quoted.... was reading and so give it a shot... trying to impress you by being more "male"... OPPS....
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eh its a story, not a poem.Originally posted by subzero_baby:the one i quoted.... was reading and so give it a shot... trying to impress you by being more "male"... OPPS.... -
kaoz... gimme some face leh.... but does it goes well with your story mister?
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hmmm.... gee... not really?Originally posted by subzero_baby: kaoz... gimme some face leh.... but does it goes well with your story mister?
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ok, ok... me never try liaoz....
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hey... as a poem itself, it was really good!Originally posted by subzero_baby:ok, ok... me never try liaoz.... -
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here let me re-paragraph it for u...Originally posted by subzero_baby:A touch, soft and tender,
A whisper, full of desire.
A gasp of sweet surrender,
As passion fuels the fire.
No words spoken between them,
No promises to be kept.
No lies being told tonight,
No looking back- No regrets.
Longing to hold each other,
Such precious little time.
Both vowed to another,
Being lonely their only crime.
Tomorrow bringing sorrow,
A brief moment of shame.
With the memory of this one night,
A release from Passion's Flames. -
how would you know the paragraph? i purposely left the paragraph out.
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i read thru it. I used feeling to feel out where paragraphing would be god.Originally posted by subzero_baby:how would you know the paragraph? i purposely left the paragraph out. -
amazing!!! wow wow wow!!!
me so lousy... -
u're not...Originally posted by subzero_baby: amazing!!! wow wow wow!!!
me so lousy...
*kisses subzero_baby on e cheeks* -
gosh/// fainted... with a smile
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too excited... double post