My side of the story...
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I really don't know what to do with you.
Served you my heart on a silver platter,
Don't know if you really meant to be so cruel.
You took it and broke my heart in two.
Fresh hopes and romantic ideals trashed,
Fragile emotions coldly crushed
One heart bleeding in silence.
A writer's spirit brokened.
All a girl wants is to be happy,
to feel forever loved and cherished.
All I exchanged for my efforts-
Sarcasm and comparison.
It seems this girl is never good enough.
When a friend shows her care and concern,
she gets several phone calls or sms in return.
While the one that is supposed to matter,
waits by her phone for the promised call that never happened.
Being a friend is so much better than one dear to the heart,
for the friend never had to ever care so much.
Friends get the helping hand and the listening ear.
A girlfriend gets the shoulder- chilled to perfection.
Trust have be earned and not blindly distributed.
Your actions only leaves me empty and disappointed.
Not every blame belongs to me and not all mistakes my fault,
but I do not mean to say that you are the cause.
I had never seeked monetary gains,
I cannot expect to be cherished and I don't believe in romance anymore.
All I ask is for some care, concern, attention and respect.
Isn't that the very least a girlfriend is entitled to have?
I'm sorry to have disappointed you, I'm not Miss Singapore.
I'm sorry I'm not what you wanted, and that you can't show me off.
I don't mean to be needy or clingy, The real me is not like that.
I just needed to feel secure.
Will you initiate a phone call or an sms to find out how I am?
Will you think of me on a rainy day and wish me warmth?
Will you listen to me when my family leaves me feeling devastated again?
Did you even really, really cared?
We belong in different worlds.
I'm sorry my naivete and stubborness believed otherwise,
I'm sorry to have made you suffer with me.
Our relationship have been nothing more than a series of quarrels.
Maybe you are right from the start... and we really are meant to be apart.
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huggy ah En' jie jie
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Originally posted by sgboy2004:huggy ah En' jie jie
hai shi baby sgboy dui en' jie hao
I won't cane you liaoz even if you do something naughty again yah~ -
Don't be too sad. You deserve a better person okay.
Hmm... about the poem, it has a great start and a good ending but somewhere in the middle you might want to consider reorganizing them. The sentences are a bit too long. -
can cane me instead?Originally posted by En':
hai shi baby sgboy dui en' jie hao
I won't cane you liaoz even if you do something naughty again yah~ -
Thats real bittersweet...
Shows us Guys can be obnox sometimes...
I vow to be a better man from now on.....
After Heng gets caned that is.. -
Originally posted by LeftBallBigger:Thats real bittersweet...
Shows us Guys can be obnox sometimes...
I vow to be a better man from now on.....
After Heng gets caned that is..
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Originally posted by DeadPoet:Don't be too sad. You deserve a better person okay.
Hmm... about the poem, it has a great start and a good ending but somewhere in the middle you might want to consider reorganizing them. The sentences are a bit too long. Thankx for your consolation, but this is really just my side of the story. It takes two hands to clap and two person to make a relationship work, so...
Orh okie, will keep in mind 
pps:
Next time I'll keep everything shorter and sweeter... But hor, hopefully no more next time worr~ -
Originally posted by HENG@:can cane me instead? Only if you promised to dress up pretty worr~
*cracks whip* -
Does that mean Heng gets to cane you after I'm done with him...?Originally posted by LeftBallBigger:Thats real bittersweet...
Shows us Guys can be obnox sometimes...
I vow to be a better man from now on.....
After Heng gets caned that is..
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ok i promise....Originally posted by En': Only if you promised to dress up pretty worr~
*cracks whip* -
Originally posted by En':Does that mean Heng gets to cane you after I'm done with him...?
no no no...the sequence is u cane Heng,
I become a better man,
I die and go to heaven and sip martinis with a cute chubby angel