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My Work, My Feeling
Hocklez
27 Jul 04, 20:36
Have join the three thingy i wrote.
Change in you
I noticed something this week
Never thought it was big deal
Place the thing behind my mind
Never had this cross my mind
I know your faith and trust in
And now u gave up
Started your second
That is a shock
Hope, you are still the one
I have always known
Unknown, yes I am
Puzzled, yes u should
Question in my mind
Answer me
To show my existance
I am always who i am
To who u are
Hope u feel it
Been waiting ever since
Nv thought it was truth
But it was through my heart
Wanting to have a word with u
But the fire burning weakly
And i realise from a mist
It was noting, but a dream
I was always in there
Trying all means of way
Jus to have a word with u
The fire was there
The glow, the flame, the ray
But it was all too weak
Noting can be done
Noting can be save
I jus hope the time will stand
Let the flame last
Jus for you to feel...
The glance
I am always there
Trying to steal a glance
You were right there
Always in your usual self
Happened again as normal
But all was not I wan to see
A person and your cheerful smile
Din expect it was speaking truth
Or was i lying to myself
What can I do
Mind was there, still
I was so filled up
Mind was in blank
Short hour being wasted
Jeolousy and selfishness
How can i, how can i
Will jus leave it how it is...
laurence82
27 Jul 04, 20:38
hmm, didnt realise ah hock is quite a poet...
gaoyue
27 Jul 04, 21:01
amazing!