Change in You

• Hocklez

  24 Jul 04, 17:38

  I noticed something this week
  
  Never thought it was big deal
  
  Place the thing behind my mind
  
  Never had this cross my mind
  
  I know your faith and trust in
  
  And now u gave up
  
  Started your second
  
  That is a shock
  
  Hope, you are still the one
  
  I have always known
  
  Unknown, yes I am
  
  Puzzled, yes u should
  
  Question in my mind
  
  Answer me
  
  To show my existance
  
  I am always who i am
  
  To who u are
  
  
  
• S!ndy

  24 Jul 04, 19:00

  your poem ar?
• Hocklez

  24 Jul 04, 19:02

  Originally posted by S!ndy:

  your poem ar?

  as u wish.
• S!ndy

  24 Jul 04, 19:03

  Originally posted by Hocklez:

  as u wish.

  no funn de.
• Hocklez

  24 Jul 04, 19:06

  Originally posted by S!ndy:

  no funn de.

  oh well... sorrie to be a spoiler then...
  so wat u wan? a love poem? lol...
• DeadPoet

  25 Jul 04, 00:39

  Originally posted by Hocklez:
  I noticed something this week
  
  Never thought it was big deal
  
  Place the thing behind my mind
  
  Never had this cross my mind
  
  I know your faith and trust in
  
  And now u gave up
  
  Started your second
  
  That is a shock
  
  Hope, you are still the one
  
  I have always known
  
  Unknown, yes I am
  
  Puzzled, yes u should
  
  Question in my mind
  
  Answer me
  
  To show my existance
  
  I am always who i am
  
  To who u are
  
  
  

  Main message of the poem?
• BaByBoY

  25 Jul 04, 00:42

  Originally posted by DeadPoet:

  Main message of the poem?

  u try reading the unhilighted parts..
  makes a little sense too
  
• Joyce

  25 Jul 04, 12:56

  ehh.. i dun get it.. anywayz u no wad.. i so darn like poems!! i jux cant score in dem.. oh wellz, i dunno.. so far i jux had my FIRST and ONLY unseen poem test.. and yay.. i passed by one mark..
• S!ndy

  25 Jul 04, 14:03

  Originally posted by BaByBoY:

  u try reading the unhilighted parts..
  makes a little sense too
  

  quite true.. hmmm. dint noe hocklez so talented.
• S!ndy

  25 Jul 04, 14:04

  Originally posted by Hocklez:

  oh well... sorrie to be a spoiler then...
  so wat u wan? a love poem? lol...

  i dun mind a love poem if u wann to write for me..
• Joyce

  25 Jul 04, 14:24

  Originally posted by S!ndy:

  quite true.. hmmm. dint noe hocklez so talented.

  .. r u sure it's his poem??
• Hocklez

  25 Jul 04, 17:20

  ok guys, the above is written with some unhappiness in my mind...
  
• Hocklez

  25 Jul 04, 17:28

  Originally posted by S!ndy:

  quite true.. hmmm. dint noe hocklez so talented.

  i am not talented in writting poem, ask deadpoet if u don believe, my first poem was posted in his forum and was in a complete mess...
  
  jus my feeling... noting much... haizzz
• Hocklez

  25 Jul 04, 17:32

  Originally posted by S!ndy:

  i dun mind a love poem if u wann to write for me..

  i donno how la...
  unless u consider tt one... lol...
  
  Eg.
  Heaven and earth will pass away...
  But my love for u will nv...
  
  ( this is some phrase me and my friend edited out of boredom lol...)
• DeadPoet

  26 Jul 04, 02:14

  Originally posted by Hocklez:

  i am not talented in writting poem, ask deadpoet if u don believe, my first poem was posted in his forum and was in a complete mess...
  
  jus my feeling... noting much... haizzz

  That is totally untrue!
  
  I think it was very well written.
  
• DeadPoet

  26 Jul 04, 02:15

  Originally posted by BaByBoY:

  u try reading the unhilighted parts..
  makes a little sense too
  

  That is the beauty of it.
• Hocklez

  26 Jul 04, 19:49

  thanx deadpoet...