ur site's a little tacky.. but good effort! i'll spend some time reading thru ur prose when er.. i have the time, which i dun now! hahaha
i went thru the first part of dreams, pretty descriptive, but check a couple of grammar mistakes. for a person that's been writing "since the beginning of time", youw should really take note.
otherwise, nice build up of setting, even tho it's a dream, it's not one of those "then i woke up and realised it was all a dream" story. i'll continue reading, atm i'm just gonna die for a few hours.
no offence man, from one writer to another.
u can post ur stories here too for more "readership"...
