a little poem dat i wrote
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ok...here's smtng i wrote...it just came out from my mind...i dunnoe how...
ok...here's how it goes...
Do i want you cos you are wonderful?
Or u r wonderful cos i want u?
do i love u cos i need u?
or i need u cos i love u?
This all seems to be confusing
But it is not as confusing as it may seems.
Love is patient, Love is kind.
Love is everything i have in u
All i really want is to hold u tight and treat u rite
And i love u cos i need u
and i want u cos u r wonderful. -
ahger in love?
so sweet -
*clap clap* is that a rap or what? haha...sounds ok
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in love?...erm.................................Originally posted by the Bear:ahger in love?
so sweet
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rap? erm...poem?Originally posted by NeonTetra:*clap clap* is that a rap or what? haha...sounds ok
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good effort
keep at it, yah? not everyone does poetry these days
sometimes i dabble in poetry too.. however if it is personal, it's something i never share with anyone else except the subject... and sometimes she doesn't even see it...
but sometimes i just write... and leave it as it is in its raw form...Originally posted by aHGer^83:in love?...erm................................. -
i dunnoe...juz hopes he sees it...Originally posted by the Bear:good effort
keep at it, yah? not everyone does poetry these days
sometimes i dabble in poetry too.. however if it is personal, it's something i never share with anyone else except the subject... and sometimes she doesn't even see it...
but sometimes i just write... and leave it as it is in its raw form... -
if not, email to him
or pull out a calligraphy pen and write it out, frame it and give as a presentOriginally posted by aHGer^83:i dunnoe...juz hopes he sees it... -
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sad lehOriginally posted by aHGer^83:wad? -
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laugh somemoreOriginally posted by BÃ¥seline:... -
den? cry?Originally posted by kopiosatu:laugh somemore -
It says...Originally posted by aHGer^83:??
I'm looking... looking... smile cos it's meaningful... then laff at myself cos I wun be able to write poem lor.
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Originally posted by BÃ¥seline:It says...
I'm looking... looking... smile cos it's meaningful... then laff at myself cos I wun be able to write poem lor. 
sometimes...u wun noe it until u try lor...writin poem is...for me is...writin wad im tinking...dat's all... -
I too may write something outta what I feel...but doesn't rhythm that all.Originally posted by aHGer^83: sometimes...u wun noe it until u try lor...writin poem is...for me is...writin wad im tinking...dat's all... -
Sorry Sergeant!Originally posted by kopiosatu:laugh somemore
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this line is part of Britney Spear's song "Sometime"Originally posted by aHGer^83:All i really want is to hold u tight and treat u rite -
he corporal only lei...Originally posted by BÃ¥seline:Sorry Sergeant! -
yup....and dat's wad i wanna do lor..Originally posted by Sir_Horny:this line is part of Britney Spear's song "Sometime" -
Originally posted by aHGer^83:ok...here's smtng i wrote...it just came out from my mind...i dunnoe how...
ok...here's how it goes...
Do i want you cos you are wonderful?
Or u r wonderful cos i want u?
do i love u cos i need u?
or i need u cos i love u?
This all seems to be confusing
But it is not as confusing as it may seems.
Love is patient, Love is kind.
Love is everything i have in u
All i really want is to hold u tight and treat u rite
And i love u cos i need u
and i want u cos u r wonderful. -
Originally posted by Churra: