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wah lau.. always make me excited that ple continue story and then destroy my sweet anticipation..
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Ha...Ha!!! I knew someone would fall for it!!!Originally posted by jOhO:wah lau.. always make me excited that ple continue story and then destroy my sweet anticipation.. -
Has the story ended??? Please continue....
So what happen in the end, did Desmond, Kevin and Rie have a Threesome in East Coast Park...
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A good story siah hha... even more memorial then my own story haha...
Keep it up... haha we hav a future author here haha
dOtz.... ur post becum an anti climax eh... lolzOriginally posted by spencer99:Has the story ended??? Please continue....
So what happen in the end, did Desmond, Kevin and Rie have a Threesome in East Coast Park... ???
Just kidding 
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Hey!! You are making me sweat from the anticipation!! Wats next????
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Sigh i tot really....got next chapter liaoz.
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fwahahha now ur turn to kenna..Originally posted by M©+square:Sigh i tot really....got next chapter liaoz. -
Nice story u have there !!
I juz read it .. its marvallous =)
*Joining in the crowd of people waiting in anticipation of ur next chapter -
heard of this before liaoz leh.....
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Panting heavily, legs pumping, sweat stinging his eyes, but Desmond kept pushing himself. He loved feeling the cold breeze against his body, whistling in his ears. T-shirt flapping noisily against the resistance, he bent his body forward in preparation for the next corner. Without slowing down, he leaned sharply. The next thing he knew, Desmond was sliding on the bicycle track. He didn't see a patch of sand on the ground till it was too late, and he lost control of his bicycle. Groaning in pain, he sat up to inspect his wounds. Nothing more than a scraped elbow, cut knee, and bruised ego here.
"Desmond!" Rie couldn't match Desmond's speed, so it took some time for her to catch up with him. "Are you alright?" She grabbed hold of his arm, looking worriedly at the wounds that were caked in sand and blood.
"Yah don't worry. I think there's a toilet up ahead. I can go there to clean my wounds."
"OK, but after that come over to my place and I'll bandage up your elbow and knee."
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"That's what you get for going so fast." They were back at Rie's place, and she was looking for her first-aid kit.
Desmond laughed it off, "I just wanted to give myself a workout. Plus the feeling of speed is exhilarating."
"But you should know you limits what. Give me your arm." Rie pulled him close as she started to wrap the first aid dressing over his elbow. Desmond felt his heart beat faster. He had never been this close to her before. He could feel her warm breath on his arm, and the silence of the living room only reminded him even more that they were alone. His heart ached for her, but he didn't dare to say anything. Surely, she wouldn't like someone like me?
After Rie finished with his elbow, she proceeded to wrap his knee. She leaned forward, and unwittingly exposed herself to him. Desmond stared down her t-shirt for a few seconds, but quickly looked away. Bastard!, he screamed inwardly, She's helping you, and you take advantage of her! What kind of person are you?
"Erm RieÂ… don't worry I think I can handle it."
"Oh OK. I'll pour you a drink." She smiled.
Desmond breathed heavily through gritted teeth, kicking himself for being such a pervert, while he wrapped the bandage forcefully around his knee.
"Wah you wrap it so tightly, how can blood flow to your feet haha."
Desmond reached out for the glass of water. His anger was fast subsiding, replaced by a warm feeling in his heart when he remembered how worried Rie had been when he injured himself, and how she bandaged his wounds.
"Thanks Rie." They looked at each other for awhile, smiling, neither of them saying anything. Then she looked away.
Desmond cleared his throat, "I think I better make a move then. I Â… erÂ… still have some school work to finish."
"OK then." Rie walked to the door, "Better take care of yourself huh."
"Yup. Thanks. See you in school tomorrow."
"See you on the bus you mean haha. Bye."
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WAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dammit it's been so long since the continuation i'm gonna have to read the whole story again.. and i'm busy now.. will read later.
but.. i'm sure it's DAMN GOOD.. so i'll say it first.. it's DAMN GOOD! -
ok readed...
i just hope u don't take another 843 years to come out the next part.. -
Originally posted by jOhO:ok readed...
i just hope u don't take another 843 years to come out the next part.. Haven reet.
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Hello... can you please just upload the whole story all at once ????? wah lao .. tis is not TCS wif some kind of DRAMA story leh.....
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Tiam Lah!Originally posted by stoner:Hello... can you please just upload the whole story all at once ????? wah lao .. tis is not TCS wif some kind of DRAMA story leh.....
People write with inspiration one leh....you don't want to wait den don't read lor. -
x2...Originally posted by M©+square:Tiam Lah!
People write with inspiration one leh....you don't want to wait den don't read lor. -
aiyoh.. next time say a bit nicer lar.. the way u say make it sound like he owe u like that..Originally posted by stoner:Hello... can you please just upload the whole story all at once ????? wah lao .. tis is not TCS wif some kind of DRAMA story leh.....
if u want u could "suggest" instead of "demand".... -
stoner: sorry bout that. it's cos i haven finish writing the story yet. wat u r seeing now is the latest part already
to all: ya i noe it took so long, but u noe, i'm a singaporean guy, and i'm stuck doing smtg that all singaporean guys haf to do in their lifetime... i wish i haf time to continue with the story too lol... i noe u guys would understand... thx for waiting 4 e story n 4 yr continued support
jOhO: the story will get extremely XXX-rated in a few chapters' time. i will give a warning b4 it comes though, dun worry. juz wanna noe yr views on this. if u dun want sex tales in yr forum, i can totally understand. i'll juz end the story b4 the bedroom scene starts lol...
Sincerely yours,
malbordus -
I guess it happens in most of r/s. From a innocent and wonderful experience to a sexual one. SighOriginally posted by Malbordus:stoner: sorry bout that. it's cos i haven finish writing the story yet. wat u r seeing now is the latest part already
to all: ya i noe it took so long, but u noe, i'm a singaporean guy, and i'm stuck doing smtg that all singaporean guys haf to do in their lifetime... i wish i haf time to continue with the story too lol... i noe u guys would understand... thx for waiting 4 e story n 4 yr continued support
jOhO: the story will get extremely XXX-rated in a few chapters' time. i will give a warning b4 it comes though, dun worry. juz wanna noe yr views on this. if u dun want sex tales in yr forum, i can totally understand. i'll juz end the story b4 the bedroom scene starts lol...
Sincerely yours,
malbordus
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i never say no to sex..Originally posted by Malbordus:jOhO: the story will get extremely XXX-rated in a few chapters' time. i will give a warning b4 it comes though, dun worry. juz wanna noe yr views on this. if u dun want sex tales in yr forum, i can totally understand. i'll juz end the story b4 the bedroom scene starts lol...
Sincerely yours,
malbordus
hmm then again..
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Fascinating. Simply fascinating.