Kim

• OldMan

  26 Mar 03, 18:20

  not loophole lah, it's a lead for part 2 mah
• jOhO

  27 Mar 03, 03:42

  Originally posted by OldMan:

  not loophole lah, it's a lead for part 2 mah

  steady lar~~ you could write too!!
• Natty

  27 Mar 03, 03:43

  Woah!!!! THis story had kept me awake.. waiting for the ending. Finally finished it.. however, the ending was alittle anti climax and unexpected.. Anyway It was GReat. Ever thought abt publishing it? kekeke
  
  Hope your next story will come out soon.. AM waiting..........
• jOhO

  27 Mar 03, 03:43

  yo de|usi0n
  
  good one man... great effort!
  
  i'd have to agree about the anti-climax, and the ending was a bit abrupt.
  
  hope to see more from u soon~!
• De|usi0n

  27 Mar 03, 08:23

  Originally posted by jOhO:

  yo de|usi0n
  
  good one man... great effort!
  
  i'd have to agree about the anti-climax, and the ending was a bit abrupt.
  
  hope to see more from u soon~!

  thanks dude, dont wanna end so early but in no mood to write when wes brown strikes
• jOhO

  28 Mar 03, 08:21

  Originally posted by De|usi0n:

  thanks dude, dont wanna end so early but in no mood to write when wes brown strikes

  next time PM me if u see it first.. i'll remove it.
  
  anyway try not to let these factors ruin ur mood and inspiration ok?