8 words poetry (rebirth)
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wat is called love, what is embraceOriginally posted by nismoS132:simi kio love, simi si embrace
wa zi zai ya jin jit wa eh chiu yi liet bo le liao
tiong keng dusk lai liao
wa jit eh nang ke east coast
ka ki jiak hong, um um lau bak sai
bo chee ke chui wa ay hia di kia
kia yi nang chio wa ai le ai tio ah ni intense
ke ko hor le sua, hor le pian,
gan pua tu lan
wa kua yi kor ang ang eh egg yolk,
an zhua an ni colorful leh?
wa di zhui lai beng kua tio le ay reflection
kua tio jiu tu lan, gia ki jior tao tim lok ke,
kua le ay jiao bin pian ripple
tim ah tim, tim dao aw ber eh nang kio wa ah siao
singapore ah singapore,
ah zhua singapore si an ni suei ay island
chin cai kia lai kia ke dou hor wa kua tio le.
kan ni na. wa hai si sibuei love u
i only know today my hand cannot catch yurs
now dusk come liaoz
i 1 person go east coast
blow wind, silently cry
no guts go find my brothers
scare they laugh me love u till so intense
in the end let u play let u cheat
damn furious
i see the red red egg yolk
wonder why it so colorful
i see your reflection in the water
see oredi tulan, pick up stone throw into the water
see your bloody face become ripple
throw ah throw, throw until behind ppl say i crazy
singapore ah singpaore
why singapore so small island?
anyhow walk walk also can bump into you.
f[/i]uck. i still love you. -
okokok good now i can read the hokkein liow! ahhaha nice one.. very very LOCALOriginally posted by nismoS132:wat is called love, what is embrace
i only know today my hand cannot catch yurs
now dusk come liaoz
i 1 person go east coast
blow wind, silently cry
no guts go find my brothers
scare they laugh me love u till so intense
in the end let u play let u cheat
damn furious
i see the red red egg yolk
wonder why it so colorful
i see your reflection in the water
see oredi tulan, pick up stone throw into the water
see your bloody face become ripple
throw ah throw, throw until behind ppl say i crazy
singapore ah singpaore
why singapore so small island?
anyhow walk walk also can bump into you.
f[/i]uck. i still love you. 
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Originally posted by nismoS132:wat is called love, what is embrace
i only know today my hand cannot catch yurs
now dusk come liaoz
i 1 person go east coast
blow wind, silently cry
no guts go find my brothers
scare they laugh me love u till so intense
in the end let u play let u cheat
damn furious
i see the red red egg yolk
wonder why it so colorful
i see your reflection in the water
see oredi tulan, pick up stone throw into the water
see your bloody face become ripple
throw ah throw, throw until behind ppl say i crazy
singapore ah singpaore
why singapore so small island?
anyhow walk walk also can bump into you.
f[/i]uck. i still love you.
very nice, liked it alot. excellant use of the words but in ah beng uncouth style -
i like the "gan puah du lan" part ahahhaha
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TMD, all si bei pro.
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Love, EmbraceOriginally posted by jOhO:Upon En''s request, we'll migrate the 8 words poetry here:
Let's start with some simple, easy to use, highly "flexible" words
1. love
2. embrace
3. hand
4. dusk
5. ripple
6. island
7. colour
8. intense
En, we can use any "transformation" of the word rite? like plural, past/present tense, past/present-participle, verbalise it, noun it, adjectivate it!! eg, intense can be intensity.
have fun pple!
click here for original thread.
Hands, Dusk
Ripples of islands
Colours so intense
This is Dunhill.
WAHAHAHAHAHA sorry i no pro at poems wahahaha -
hahahhaha.. er.. no comments.Originally posted by gasband:Love, Embrace
Hands, Dusk
Ripples of islands
Colours so intense
This is Dunhill.
WAHAHAHAHAHA sorry i no pro at poems wahahaha -
One dayOriginally posted by jOhO:Upon En''s request, we'll migrate the 8 words poetry here:
Let's start with some simple, easy to use, highly "flexible" words
1. love
2. embrace
3. hand
4. dusk
5. ripple
6. island
7. colour
8. intense
En, we can use any "transformation" of the word rite? like plural, past/present tense, past/present-participle, verbalise it, noun it, adjectivate it!! eg, intense can be intensity.
have fun pple!
click here for original thread.
i told her
Its all over
She say
wah sey
u good
very good
i say i don love her le
she ask me buy ke le
no money
she lufs
give me the money
and put it on my hand
I shouted
one Coke
uncle say
what colour
i say blue
he say sold out
i ran out
Told her this island no ke le
she say not thirsty le
i embrace the money
and went to geylang
sitting beside the long kang
i throw it in
got ripple
and looks like nipple
i steam
so i found her
she is a ger
from indonesia
we went to the room
it was dusk liao
so dusty also
i clean up the room
and then vroom vroom...
Intense
was the word to describe it
for that moment i feel the tutti
running inside me
Ayz... how was it ah ?? newbie trying out ..
wahhaha
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fwahahhahaha... good for a first timer?
how come geylang got indonesian meh? maybe u'd know better than me..
goodnite!~ -
thankx...Originally posted by jOhO:Upon En''s request, we'll migrate the 8 words poetry here:
Let's start with some simple, easy to use, highly "flexible" words
1. love
2. embrace
3. hand
4. dusk
5. ripple
6. island
7. colour
8. intense
En, we can use any "transformation" of the word rite? like plural, past/present tense, past/present-participle, verbalise it, noun it, adjectivate it!! eg, intense can be intensity.
have fun pple!
click here for original thread.
erm, for mine, was so terrible that I didn't wanted to post, but...
wat the heck...
I was an island
unto myself,
that that broke me,
was the intensity of her smiles...
Her soft hands, and sweet gait,
the colour of golden dusk in her eyes.
All which through the ripples of fate,
- became mine...
Then when love ended it's
- too sweet embrace
It all happened too soon,
leaving no room for pretensions...
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geez, even I find mine terrible
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Is stress a good enough excuse...? -
As permitted by jOhO, these are the new 8 words for this thread. Was at a loss when selecting, so i decided to pick them up from Star Wars instead
. Would dearly appreciate it if we didnt have the Star Wars theme in our poems too 
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1. force
2. twins
3. fear
4. knight
5. strikes
6. rebel
7. star
8. return -
hey thanx JL but can u hear my groans!! hahaha
anyway i haven't had time to think about these words, will get to it, probably later tonite. -
sure or not... not cheem wat the words..... looking 4ward to the first poem.Originally posted by jOhO:hey thanx JL but can u hear my groans!! hahaha
anyway i haven't had time to think about these words, will get to it, probably later tonite. -
with those words, looks like i'll come up with something comical, rather than profound hahahaOriginally posted by JLennon:sure or not... not cheem wat the words..... looking 4ward to the first poem. -
i think thats the idea. we aren't posting for the sake of posing. so just let creativity flow forth!Originally posted by jOhO:with those words, looks like i'll come up with something comical, rather than profound hahaha -
WOW!!! Everyone all so good! I dun wanna try liaoz... hehehehee go hide in my warm bed....
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u're just lazy!Originally posted by p|nk:WOW!!! Everyone all so good! I dun wanna try liaoz... hehehehee go hide in my warm bed.... -
Yes I m lazy and well they are good!!!!Originally posted by jOhO:u're just lazy!
Heh seriously I m surprised! -
surprised? ehhe at wat?Originally posted by p|nk:Yes I m lazy and well they are good!!!!
Heh seriously I m surprised!
that singaporeans are creative?
actually i'm not. but there's nothing helping young singaporeans cultivate this creativity. told u liow. tan bo chiak! and as for that hokkein poem, well it's "frowned upon" becos it's a dialect, and not mandarin. go figure.
the "tan bo chiak" problem goes for art, sport, and i'm sure we all can think of many other things as well..
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True true... Sports.... hehehheeee from young i know bo tan chiak... sigh.....Originally posted by jOhO:surprised? ehhe at wat?
that singaporeans are creative?
actually i'm not. but there's nothing helping young singaporeans cultivate this creativity. told u liow. tan bo chiak! and as for that hokkein poem, well it's "frowned upon" becos it's a dialect, and not mandarin. go figure.
the "tan bo chiak" problem goes for art, sport, and i'm sure we all can think of many other things as well..
Art of course! seriously in sg, doing art is soooooo frowned upon... sigh... what has sg become!! sad... so sad..... 
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tomolo then do the new one. past 72 hours sleep total less than 10 hours. my brain feels like jelly, looks like coleslaw, tastes like yogurt, and is on sale for $0.95, special offer now, 1st 5 customers get 2 for the price of 3!!
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Originally posted by nismoS132:tomolo then do the new one. past 72 hours sleep total less than 10 hours. my brain feels like jelly, looks like coleslaw, tastes like yogurt, and is on sale for $0.95, special offer now, 1st 5 customers get 2 for the price of 3!!
rest well!! -
i'm trying this now.. and i dun seem to be able to get anything out of it!Originally posted by JLennon:As permitted by jOhO, these are the new 8 words for this thread. Was at a loss when selecting, so i decided to pick them up from Star Wars instead . Would dearly appreciate it if we didnt have the Star Wars theme in our poems too .
1. force
2. twins
3. fear
4. knight
5. strikes
6. rebel
7. star
8. return -
behold, phantom knightsOriginally posted by JLennon:As permitted by jOhO, these are the new 8 words for this thread. Was at a loss when selecting, so i decided to pick them up from Star Wars instead . Would dearly appreciate it if we didnt have the Star Wars theme in our poems too .
1. force
2. twins
3. fear
4. knight
5. strikes
6. rebel
7. star
8. return
we shall strike tonite
pound fear into their eyes
with our twin lances might
the rebels, they shall fight
but our force will strive
under the stars creepy light
return when the sun shine bright -
i dun understand at all....Originally posted by jOhO:
er.. i have to get it spoken to me if not sure cannot understand.. eheh
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