8 words poetry (rebirth)
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Upon En''s request, we'll migrate the 8 words poetry here:
Let's start with some simple, easy to use, highly "flexible" wordsOriginally posted by En':This is a game where a user of this forum gives out 8 completely random words (or 10 for advanced) and the rest of the members try to compose a poem, (making sure the poem includes all 8 words), that actually makes sense... Anyone up for the challenge?
1. love
2. embrace
3. hand
4. dusk
5. ripple
6. island
7. colour
8. intense
En, we can use any "transformation" of the word rite? like plural, past/present tense, past/present-participle, verbalise it, noun it, adjectivate it!! eg, intense can be intensity.
have fun pple!
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One Night Stood
It was the night i met you face to face,
an online love in a sleepless island.
The warmth and length of your sweet embrace,
followed by minutes of eerie silence.
You have just known me and you are holding hands,
in fact it has been only 4 months so far.
Suddenly, you were overwhelmed by a moment of intense,
The next thing i saw was the colour of your bra.
We started making love from dusk till dawn,
The glitter of the morning and you were gone.
Were these sparks or ripples of my dream,
A night of pleasure or so it seems.
I hope you wouldn't treat me like a fool,
I tried calling you but you weren't around.
But there you lie on the bottom of my pool,
Naked and dead, just totally drowned.
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ehehe sexy and rhymes too..
i haven't done mine yet... too lazy..
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3. hand
Chim...you all so got ink...
lets see,
On this little busy island,
When love among is getting silent,
I roam the colourful nightspot district,
Insearch for a angel embrace for a lustful discreet
Till dusk i held her in my possession,
with intense feeling ready for passion,
Making ripples after ripples during contention,
And kiss her hand with no regretion.
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well... all the words are there..Originally posted by sugardaddy:3. hand
Chim...you all so got ink...
lets see,
On this little busy island,
When love among is getting silent,
I roam the colourful nightspot district,
Insearch for a angel embrace for a lustful discreet
Till dusk i held her in my possession,
with intense feeling ready for passion,
Making ripples after ripples during contention,
And kiss her hand with no regretion.
Will this do?
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hahah...you sounds as if it was really bad...hahaha...Originally posted by jOhO:well... all the words are there.. -
i appreciated the effort! really i did.Originally posted by sugardaddy:hahah...you sounds as if it was really bad...hahaha...
at least u put in more than me! i haven't even bothered to come up with something yet.. tooooo tired.. -
after dusk when all are asleep,Originally posted by jOhO:1. love
2. embrace
3. hand
4. dusk
5. ripple
6. island
7. colour
8. intense
En, we can use any "transformation" of the word rite? like plural, past/present tense, past/present-participle, verbalise it, noun it, adjectivate it!! eg, intense can be intensity.
have fun pple!
click here for original thread.
a visitor from afar begins to creep.
Death approaches with Her outstretched hands
to embrace you with love and tenderness.
SheÂ’ll bring you to Her island of souls
a place where no emotion grows.
coloured only by intense gray
and shadowy ripples of blackened hay.
jOhO, where's urs???? -
wah lau.. urs is good.. don't pressure ley~~!!Originally posted by JLennon:after dusk when all are asleep,
a visitor from afar begins to creep.
Death approaches with Her outstretched hands
to embrace you with love and tenderness.
SheÂ’ll bring you to Her island of souls
a place where no emotion grows.
coloured only by intense gray
and shadowy ripples of blackened hay.
jOhO, where's urs???? -
/mi sit corner to watch the poems
so nice
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Baby sgboy2004 -
ok here we go...
There he was, old Mr [color=orange]Ripple
Smiling, unhidden dimple.
He was ninety-three
Had a busted knee
And skin with many a wrinkle!
Come to me, my love.
Said he, and looked above.
God took my hand
To the promised land
You come too, follow my dove!
No, said I, it's too intense
I can't stand their pretence.
Seen their true colour
Devoid of all valour
And they don't make any sense!
Dusk was fast approaching
the island quickly darkening
I am cold,
to him I told.
Come, he said, let's go to the king.
His embrace wonderfully soft, tender,
This milieu gettng pleasantly warmer.
I am flying
I'm not dying
Look, the dove is getting nearer![/color]
Like your's JLennon, it has connotations of death in it. -
death? wow....
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Baby sgboy2004 -
or.. life after death.. *shrug*Originally posted by sgboy2004:
death? wow....
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Baby sgboy2004 -
hey, not fair!!!! u used "ripple" as "Mr Ripple"!!!!Originally posted by jOhO:ok here we go...
There he was, old Mr [color=orange]Ripple
Smiling, unhidden dimple.
He was ninety-three
Had a busted knee
And skin with many a wrinkle!
Come to me, my love.
Said he, and looked above.
God took my hand
To the promised land
You come to, follow my dove!
No, said I, it's too intense
I can't stand their pretence.
Seen their true colour
Devoid of all valour
And they don't make any sense!
Dusk was fast approaching
the island quickly darkening
I am cold,
to him I told.
Come, he said, let's go to the king.
His embrace wonderfully soft, tender,
This milieu gettng pleasantly warmer.
I am flying
I'm not dying
Look, the dove is getting nearer![/color]
Like your's JLennon, it has connotations of death in it. Actually i am not too familiar with 5 sentence stanzas thats why all my attempts are even-numbered.
while ours have connotations of death, ur realm of death is certainly more inviting than mine. death is personified in my case whereas death is merely another stage of life. u had a different approach, v good *thumns up*. i guess we were both all out to twist the most obvious theme of the 8 words to something else. -
yeah man... it was too easy to come up with a sunset on a beautiful island, loving hands, embracing.. and possibly breaking another pair of reading glasses?!?Originally posted by JLennon:hey, not fair!!!! u used "ripple" as "Mr Ripple"!!!! Actually i am not too familiar with 5 sentence stanzas thats why all my attempts are even-numbered.
while ours have connotations of death, ur realm of death is certainly more inviting than mine. death is personified in my case whereas death is merely another stage of life. u had a different approach, v good *thumns up*. i guess we were both all out to twist the most obvious theme of the 8 words to something else.
this five line stanza is a limerick.. it goes, a,a,b,b,a (as in the rhyming).. -
oic..... interesting, mabbe i should try the 5-liner next time. shall i write another based on ur bunny and banshee experience?Originally posted by jOhO:yeah man... it was too easy to come up with a sunset on a beautiful island, loving hands, embracing.. and possibly breaking another pair of reading glasses?!?
this five line stanza is a limerick.. it goes, a,a,b,b,a (as in the rhyming)..
EN'!!!! WHERE'S UR 8-WORDER!!!!!!!! hope she hears this msg. -
Originally posted by JLennon:
mauhaha bunnies and banshees.. geesh dun gimme ideas... i'm single ya know!
oic..... interesting, mabbe i should try the 5-liner next time. shall i write another based on ur bunny and banshee experience?
[b]EN'!!!! WHERE'S UR 8-WORDER!!!!!!!! hope she hears this msg.[/b]
she's a little stressed up these couple of days, we'll give it till tonite lor, then get another 8 words happenin.. -
she got exams? if u dun mind, lemme contribute the next 8?Originally posted by jOhO:mauhaha bunnies and banshees.. geesh dun gimme ideas... i'm single ya know!
she's a little stressed up these couple of days, we'll give it till tonite lor, then get another 8 words happenin.. -
of course i dun mindOriginally posted by JLennon:she got exams? if u dun mind, lemme contribute the next 8?
she's got attachment.. and not happy about it i guess. -
anyone else wanna try these 8 words while stocks last!!!
these 8 are easy... really! -
wah nobody ar? so sad.. *sigh*
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what loving hate, what scathing love,Originally posted by jOhO:1. love
2. embrace
3. hand
4. dusk
5. ripple
6. island
7. colour
8. intense
what sweet embrace thy hands make.
as sets the sun, at dusk we part,
what sweet sorrow runneth through my heart.
intense they be, attest i shall
for my heart pounds upon my chest
to create naught but a violent ripple through the air
darken the skys do, the colours that runneth through
bear witness as i become king
of an island named thee
or something like that. -
wow.. nice nice! *bows to the king*Originally posted by nismoS132:what loving hate, what scathing love,
what sweet embrace thy hands make.
as sets the sun, at dusk we part,
what sweet sorrow runneth through my heart.
intense they be, attest i shall
for my heart pounds upon my chest
to create naught but a violent ripple through the air
darken the skys do, the colours that runneth through
bear witness as i become king
of an island named thee
or something like that.
can i be ur musketeer? -
simi kio love, simi si embraceOriginally posted by jOhO:1. love
2. embrace
3. hand
4. dusk
5. ripple
6. island
7. colour
8. intense
wa zi zai ya jin jit wa eh chiu yi liet bo le liao
tiong keng dusk lai liao
wa jit eh nang ke east coast
ka ki jiak hong, um um lau bak sai
bo chee ke chui wa ay hia di kia
kia yi nang chio wa ai le ai tio ah ni intense
ke ko hor le sua, hor le pian,
gan pua tu lan
wa kua yi kor ang ang eh egg yolk,
an zhua an ni colorful leh?
wa di zhui lai beng kua tio le ay reflection
kua tio jiu tu lan, gia ki jior tao tim lok ke,
kua le ay jiao bin pian ripple
tim ah tim, tim dao aw ber eh nang kio wa ah siao
singapore ah singapore,
ah zhua singapore si an ni suei ay island
chin cai kia lai kia ke dou hor wa kua tio le.
kan ni na. wa hai si sibuei love u
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Originally posted by nismoS132:simi kio love, simi si embrace
wa zi zai ya jin jit wa eh chiu yi liet bo le liao
tiong keng dusk lai liao
wa jit eh nang ke east coast
ka ki jiak hong, um um lau bak sai
bo chee hor pie eh nang kua tio
bo ke chui wa ay hia di kia
kia yi nang chio wa ai le ai tio ah ni intense
ke kao hor le sua, hor le pian
wa kua yi kor ang ang eh egg yolk,
an zhua an ni colorful leh?
wa di zhui lai beng kua tio le ay reflection
kua tio jiu tu lan, gia ki jior tao tim lok ke,
kua le ay jiao bin pian ripple
tim ah tim, tim dao aw ber eh nang kio wa ah siao
singapore ah singapore,
ah zhua singapore si an ni suei ay island
chin cai kia lai kia ke dou hor wa kua tio le.
kan ni na. wa hai si sibuei love u
er.. i have to get it spoken to me if not sure cannot understand.. eheh