Repost of Bluberry Skies

• jOhO

  10 Mar 03, 21:41

  oh my goodeness... half brothers and sisters.. hahahaah. jap or korean drama?
  
  ok i'm gonna crap on u again!
  
  first line.. you're gonna wake up LATE? think u meant early?
  
  untolerable should be intolerable.
  
  reservations MET by should be made?
  
  still got minor ones lar.. but aiyoh i dun wanna be too picky..
  
• Master -_-

  10 Mar 03, 21:44

  Originally posted by jOhO:
  oh my goodeness... half brothers and sisters.. hahahaah. jap or korean drama?
  
  ok i'm gonna crap on u again!
  
  first line.. you're gonna wake up LATE? think u meant early?
  
  untolerable should be [b]intolerable.
  
  reservations MET by should be made?
  
  still got minor ones lar.. but aiyoh i dun wanna be too picky..
  [/b]

  kaoz... u here to read or spot my mistakes..
• Parka

  10 Mar 03, 21:46

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  kaoz... u here to read or spot my mistakes..

  Whahahahahaaaaaaaa.
  
  
• Parka

  10 Mar 03, 21:48

  Originally posted by jOhO:
  oh my goodeness... half brothers and sisters.. hahahaah. jap or korean drama?
  
  ok i'm gonna crap on u again!
  
  first line.. you're gonna wake up LATE? think u meant early?
  
  untolerable should be [b]intolerable.
  
  reservations MET by should be made?
  
  still got minor ones lar.. but aiyoh i dun wanna be too picky..
  [/b]

  I think I have a lot of mistakes too, I guess.
  
  Should run the grammer check in MSword more often
• Master -_-

  10 Mar 03, 21:48

  I want to improve on my story-telling skills..
  Must make better plots.
• jOhO

  10 Mar 03, 21:51

  i know i know i have to stop..
  
  best thing is.. i dun get this "pleasure" from other pple for my work! can't be they read my work and are so taken aback by the profoundness that they are speechless?
  
  spelling is something u can check, but grammer and usage i think MS word is a little too restricted.
  
  plot is important, but then to express is, kaoz that's not easy. i have problems ALL the time..
• Master -_-

  10 Mar 03, 21:53

  u discouraged me from continuing realizing at how much i suck
• jOhO

  10 Mar 03, 21:55

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  u discouraged me from continuing realizing at how much is suck

  alamak i never said the story suck mar... just correcting mainly TYPOS anyway!
  
  u stop writing i stop being ur fren... *pout*
• Parka

  10 Mar 03, 22:03

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  u discouraged me from continuing realizing at how much i suck

  The more you write, the more you can write.
• jOhO

  10 Mar 03, 22:05

  Originally posted by Parka:

  The more you write, the more you can write.

  
• Master -_-

  10 Mar 03, 22:06

  
• Master -_-

  1 Apr 03, 01:05

  should i continue?
• jOhO

  1 Apr 03, 01:07

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  should i continue?

  no... u should be asking instead:
  
  "why am i not continuing??"
  
  
• Master -_-

  1 Apr 03, 01:15

  Originally posted by jOhO:

  no... u should be asking instead:
  
  "why am i not continuing??"
  
  

  yeah...GN
• jOhO

  1 Apr 03, 01:16

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  yeah...GN

  GN?
• Master -_-

  1 Apr 03, 01:17

  Originally posted by jOhO:

  GN?

  Grammar Nazi
• jOhO

  1 Apr 03, 01:22

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  Grammar Nazi

  
  
  aww cmon.. i dun see u berating hitler like that?
• Master -_-

  1 Apr 03, 01:23

  Originally posted by jOhO:

  
  
  aww cmon.. i dun see u berating hitler like that?

  why should i berate him? ur one of his schutzstaffel posse...
• fish&chipz

  1 Apr 03, 01:26

  wahliew..dun crap liao leh master...
  continue e story lehhhh....
  quick.....
• Master -_-

  1 Apr 03, 01:27

  Originally posted by fish&chipz:

  wahliew..dun crap liao leh master...
  continue e story lehhhh....
  quick.....

  no more brain juice.. maybe tomorrow?
• jOhO

  1 Apr 03, 01:32

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  why should i berate him? ur one of his schutzstaffel posse...

  if i needed my tongue twister i'd used this:
  
  The sixth sick sheik's sixth sheep's sick.
  
  
  
  ok no more crapping. i await ur continuation in patience.
  
  
• fish&chipz

  1 Apr 03, 01:36

  Originally posted by Master -_-:

  no more brain juice.. maybe tomorrow?

  quick go bu chong now!
  im waitinggggg.....
• Devon

  1 Apr 03, 10:21

  no more story?
• Devon

  7 Apr 03, 16:46

  realli no more continuation??
• S!ndy

  26 Apr 03, 17:30

  Why the story nvr continue liao.. Me wait impatient liao leh..